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Into My Heart......
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Into My Heart...... |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you 
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Into my heart you found your way without any maps to guide you no directions to follow yet you knew where to go and how to get there…. here…. that place in my heart that no one else knows about where I hide my innermost wants my innermost needs, innermost love…. you stepped inside and made yourself to home as if you’d been there all along and it seems to me, ………..you had. ~SEA~ |
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Alan Senior Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 1499right next door |
isn't it nice when someone does that...good read little lady.. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oh Susan, this is so warm and tender. I love this feeling. Enjoyed! ~Hugs, Nancy~
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* such a gentle way he entered your heart. The romance in this wonderful poem is beautiful and put a smile on my face to read it. BRAVO!!! Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Your sweet heart sings of true love heavenly! (smiles) May his love always flourish in your heart! (smiles) Your words are timelessly beautiful always, sweet Susan! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Susan, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SEA~ I like it~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
He must have found his way there by instinct. And isn't that better than any map? If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
This is very good. |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Susan, Awwww! This is so sweet  Tara Don't marry for money... You can borrow it cheaper! |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Susan, this speaks volumes of love within a heart...I only hope it is returned as well. If this is you and your love, I wish you so much of it. You have a beautiful heart. |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
Susan, I'm happy you allowed him in where he obviously belonged all along. Sweet, tender write, dear friend. (((hugs))) Michael Michael Auguste~ |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
Isn't it amazing what love can do to a man (or a woman) when it comes to finding the way to our hearts Very sweet write, Susan. Dee I wish you every happiness and may you always have the best of the good things in life. a brand |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
you're on a roll, my girl...keep 'em coming... |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Alan~ yes, it really is thank you Nancy~ you are so sweet thank you Startime~ I'm glad I made you smile and yes, very gently thank you Noah~ you are such a sweetie pie! thank you Marge~ *hugs* right back to you!! thank you Tracey~ much better than a map, but then most guys never use one anyway  LOL thank you SmartChick~ thank you very much RP~ thank you dear Tara, you are wonderful Magnus~ I think you have a beautiful heart too...you are a very sweet man thank you Michael~ I don't suppose I had a choice really, he was meant to be there (((hugs))) to you too my friend Dee~ it is amazing and pretty fantastic too thank you Sunshine~ thank you! I will try ~SEA |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
SEA, What a wonderful path it was I'm sure. Lovely poem. |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
You do well with free verse keep it up o yuh |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
liked it |
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Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Soooooo beautiful, SEA! Lovely, indeed! |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Well, gal pal, I just loved this to pieces. What a lovely place it would be to reside ... your heart Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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BrightStar Member
since 2001-04-08
Posts 219 |
Thump bump. Admiring you at Passions. |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
you stepped inside and made yourself to home as if you’d been there all along and it seems to me, ………..you had. Beautiful write of a perfect fit. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
This one speaks volumes to me, SEA. It is beautiful imagery, a tender message, and so romantic. Letting someone into unmapped territory.... |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Well ......... YEAH!!!!!!!!!!! |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
SEA- I love when you write like this. Just beautiful, my friend. Hugs, ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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