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BloomingRose
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0 posted 2001-10-19 06:57 PM



Ember's Of The Sea
~*~
Glowing embers settle on the open sea
a little kiss of warmth
washes over me,
touching the blues.
Serenity melts,
covering us as one.
Sparks fly,
I swear,
it must be July


BloomingRose

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ctowen
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1 posted 2001-10-19 07:03 PM


I say sparks fly!!!
I felt a warmth as the suns golden embers melted into the waters horizon only to awaken the nights forbidden desires ...
A most sensuous and touching piece,
thank you for the read.

[This message has been edited by ctowen (edited 10-19-2001).]

Marge Tindal
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2 posted 2001-10-19 07:15 PM


BloomingRose~
Seems you and I just about have the day covered ...
Sunrise to sunset~
LOVE THIS~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Startime
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3 posted 2001-10-19 09:15 PM


As darkness falls over the Prairies I can read your words, close my eyes and be transported to where I can watch the sunset on the ocean. *sigh* MAGNIFICENT!!!

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

OctoberSky
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4 posted 2001-10-19 10:04 PM


This is very lovely, and so serene

love the picture, and the feeling of this


[This message has been edited by OctoberSky (edited 10-19-2001).]

vlraynes
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5 posted 2001-10-24 04:06 AM



Deb-
   I love this!
   Beautifully written, my friend...
   and the graphic is gorgeous.
   Hugs,
   ~Vicky


"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

wayoutwalt
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6 posted 2001-10-24 08:20 AM


Nice picture painted no need for graphic o yuh
Mistletoe Angel
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7 posted 2001-10-24 08:49 AM




(sigh) Oooooohhhhhh, this is so so romantic! (sigh) Your beautiful words of love are soooooo romantic and sing with such sweetness! (smiles) May July forever flourish in your heart, as do the romantic blessings of every other month! (kiss on cheek) Muah! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Debra, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

MyEnchanted_Melody
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across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be.
8 posted 2001-10-24 09:32 AM




Wow.....beautiful....& breathtaking

You can't imagine just how much I miss the sea at this moment.....

Thank you
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

SmartChick
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9 posted 2001-10-24 10:09 AM


This is very good. I love the sumset.
BloomingRose
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10 posted 2001-10-24 11:58 AM


ctowen~ Thank you.

Marge~ Oh yeah, sunrise to sunset! Thank you sweet friend.

Startime~ Here's wishing you a gorgeous sunset!

OctoberSky~ So glad you found serenity here. Thank you for reading.  

Vicky~ Thank you always, my friend.

Walt~ Glad you liked.  

Noah~ Thank you so much for such a nice reply. I am glad you enjoyed.

Enchanted~ Thanks so much  

Smartchick~ Thank you for reading. Glad you like the sunset.  

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