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Open Poetry #16

How Brilliant

Topheth
Member

since 2001-09-08

Posts 297
Texas

0 posted 2001-10-18 08:49 PM

I remember so sweetly,
fondly that night -
old, thin blanket beneath me,
soft, warm ground,
and short grass like pins.
Your face and the heavens above me.

How brilliant,
the both of them.

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

1 posted 2001-10-18 08:52 PM

Short, sweet and TRUE.

Lovely.

smile...and BRILLIANT!

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

2 posted 2001-10-18 08:56 PM

Jeph, How lovely....the heavens and her face looking down into those eyes...er, at you...sorry...I know, I'm trying.
Nice write!
~Hugs, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So that you won't ever forget me.~

Startime
Member Ascendant

since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

3 posted 2001-10-18 08:57 PM

*sigh* under a star lit sky. Beautiful. Simply beautiful.

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

4 posted 2001-10-18 09:14 PM

Topeth, Once again I have enjoyed your writing. Well done. Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

5 posted 2001-10-18 09:36 PM

very romantic

Tiersdin
Member Elite

since 2000-11-17

Posts 2364
east coast

6 posted 2001-10-19 03:46 PM

Pretty!

~Tier

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

7 posted 2001-10-19 04:10 PM

short but oh so nice....no need for critique
here.

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