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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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Even I am sick of me-- head in pound relentlessly-- freedom found within the keys unlocking labyrinth, my feet in argument of mind's concern I hesitate too long at turn intellect at war with voice-- I wish renounce my will of choice. I surrender. Cease this war. I forgot what I fight for. If ever had I faith? NO MORE. Weary, I fall on my sword... To think how many I have slain so I might live to fight again... as though I made a difference-- I laugh aloud at my pretense. Love was wonder's innocence, and all my longing, pure nonsense. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Is it time for serenity to go outside and howl at the moon in an unserene fashion? I find it helps me sometimes. Not tonight though, it's freezin out, so I'll just howl in here. Want me to howl a little for you too? |
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Heather Miller Member
since 2000-07-19
Posts 409Bryan, Ohio USA |
Nice read.....thanks Heather (CherokeeGirl) Without the experiance of love where would we be? We would have no memories to cherish. |
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The Lady of Shallot Senior Member
since 2001-10-03
Posts 818USA |
Every word we write makes a difference, in one way or another. We all become weary of the battle, and life is a battlefield at times. Even the most complex labyrinth has a door to freedom. Forgive my rambling! -befriend yourself and you will never be alone- |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* when I feel this way I know it is time for me to go to my favorite place to listen to the wind or the ocean waves or a running stream. I find those things soothing to my heart and soul. My heart goes out to you. You are doing the right thing by writing it out. Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
The title says it all  |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
Even I am sick of me-- head in pound relentlessly-- Oh, how often I have thought that myself. Great write Serenity, I think you got it all out there!!!  If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
wanted to thank you all for the kind generosity of the time and thought of your replies....especially Balladeer! *WINK* |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
You express so well the pangs of life. I sense the time and toll on your heart...and hope the scene will be one that you will rise from and take a bow. You so deserve to be the star of center stage with roses thrown at your feet. Sincerely, Regina |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
This is a great outporing of your emotions Luscious I am with rwood though... You so deserve to be the star of center stage with roses thrown at your feet. I couldnt agree more Maree  |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Not nonsense to me, serenity... have you been reading my journal? *G* I know this turmoil and disillusion... you've written it so well. *S* |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Well, stuff and nonsense then, I swear, must appeal to me... enjoyed this one, Serene one... |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
you call it nonsense some would call it love's long search love lives inside you look within to find your love love yourself and love finds you Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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