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Come In Quietly....
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Come In Quietly.... |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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Come in Quietly In this room of quiet spent she rocks memories of heaven’s lent to and fro to and fro to and fro lo this cool October mourn she remembers and is torn to and fro to and fro to and fro I would call to her a name but this day brings quiet’s fame to and fro to and fro to and fro so instead I shall draw a chair and in silence, we shall share to and fro to and fro to and fro in friend, in kind in sympathy’s mind we shall rock as memories lock to and fro to and fro to and fro In Memory of Michelle, for Martie |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Quiet memories are sometimes the best comfort that we shall find. I am sure that Martie will thank you for this and your kind heart and friendship. Well written and even better example of what caring means. |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Soft and gentle....lovely. Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Karilea--I felt you there before the poem, and to rock with you brings much comfort. Thank you for your loving friendship. |
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sunshinemist Senior Member
since 2001-09-29
Posts 595Fl. sunshines early mist |
Sunshine- very lovely write. Memories are great reminders that we have loved and lived.  ~hugs~ Mariesmiles ~Marie~ |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
Said with the tender understanding and sharing I have aways seen in your loving words. This is beautiful and touched my heart. Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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RSWells Member Elite
since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533 |
Quite often a mere silent presence is far more reassuring than a situation stifled by the inadequacies of language. A comforting thoughtful write. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
quietly listening. . . wonderfully done. . . ----------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
As gentle as a lullabye....so nice of you to do this for Martie and her Michelle. ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~ |
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The Lady of Shallot Senior Member
since 2001-10-03
Posts 818USA |
How utterly devotional.....such peace and comfort in these words. This is so kind, so very kind. -befriend yourself and you will never be alone- |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
Sunshine...you certainly do know how to add warmth to anyone's heart no matter where they are sitting. So wonderful this verse. Saving this for a porch day. Hugs! Sincerely, Regina |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Peaceful remembrance. Thoughtful and nicely written. Deb |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
What a beautiful poem... this speaks volumes of what friendship is all about... being there, caring, sharing. *S* [This message has been edited by suthern (edited 10-19-2001).] |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Beautiful penned!! Charisma |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
rock-a-bye your mem'ries to a Sunshine melody |
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