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Never whisper my name
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Never whisper my name |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
The secrecy of this love terminated in kisses culminated in passion but must end with goodbye Loving you came easy two hearts in need of love An accidental touch too desired to ignore wanting anticipating longing Breaking all the rules for the sake of us But we must walk away from this torment that we once called love but that is really lust If we see each other in a crowded street pretend you don't see me I will do the same Never whisper my name [This message has been edited by walker (edited 10-18-2001).] |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Oh, this one is full of emotion. A never-meant-to-be love affair, evaporating into thin air. |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
An accidental touch too desired to ignore wanting anticipating longing Breaking all the rules for the sake of us My new walker favorite...love the quiet impact of the last line. |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
walker - as the old song goes - "if you see me walking down the street - walk on by." Bravo!! Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
How sad that it was never ment to be but when the moon is full and passion fills the blood who can resist. BRAVO!! A magnificent poem with incredible impact. Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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