All Fall Sounds " ( October Work-Shop 2001 )

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Open Poetry #16

All Fall Sounds " ( October Work-Shop 2001 )

Dr.Moose1
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since 1999-09-05

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Bewilderment , USA

0 posted 2001-10-18 08:40 PM

Thwack ! The axe splits wood with , ... Crack !
Flocks , a fleet of honking horns .
Rustled rasp of rust brown leaves
whisked , with whoosh , on wind-swept morn .

Thunk and clunk , as chunks are piled .
Scolds of strident squawking jay .
Squeak ! , of weathered wood-shed hinge .
Clang ! , as tools are put away .

Thud , of muddied boots on stairs ,
wood-winds whistle day to end .
Pine-wood pops to fan the flames ,
contented sighs , wish thee , my friend ,

symbolic in simplicity ,
all fall sounds in harmony .

Startime
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since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

1 posted 2001-10-18 08:55 PM

STANDING OVATION!!!!BRAVO!!!I LOVE IT!!I could hear it all so clearly. MAGNIFICENT!!!

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

2 posted 2001-10-18 08:56 PM

I love it! But I'm glad I have a monitor heater this year, using #1 fuel...really cool, not having to chop and axe at ZERO and below. (Love the ono stuff.)

[This message has been edited by Midnitesun (edited 10-18-2001).]

Tracey
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since 2001-08-29

Posts 2808
where insanity meets breeding

3 posted 2001-10-18 10:00 PM

Cool onomatathingy. I think you should go to the head of the class!!! (I'm still out in the school yard smokin and lookin tough!!!)

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

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