Open Poetry #16 |
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Just a Senorita in Love |
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Victoria![]()
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869![]() |
Senor, I would love to dance with you Im a senorita lonely and blue sheltered from life I would love to be your wife and have a bambino who looks just like you Senor, I would love to cook for you and share a margarita or two when you awake from your siesta Will you share your dreams? share them with me beneath strings of moonlight and the serenade of a palm tree Let me bathe your calloused hands with the softness of my lips can you feel my shadow? like a lunar eclipse drawing closer with the shyness of my kiss Senor, I must leave before you awake Im just an innocent senorita but my heart truly aches In the shadow of your Sombrero i leave you a red rose within its red petals my love from a distance will grow My love for you..I guess you will never know unless you recognize the little girl who played beneath the pinata with long ebony curls Will you remember the paper red rose? Adios Senor, Adios Every child is an artist. The challenge is to remain an artist once he grows up. Pablo Picasso [This message has been edited by Victoria (edited 10-18-2001).] |
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RosePetal![]() ![]()
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
Victoria this is so very cool! That senor will notice you and think of you every time he hears the madonna song "La isla bonita" LOL! : ) |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
May all your Senorita dreams come true...James |
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RSWells Member Elite
since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533 |
Ah, an ice cold Tecate with salt on the rim and a lime. A rose on the bed which we can strip of it's petals. Muy bueno! |
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Midnitesun![]()
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Your words fell like those sweet treats from the pinata. Gracias! |
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Victoria![]()
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
thank you rosepetal...i am so happy you enjoyed ![]() james...romantic James..thank you for peeking in ![]() Gracias Ricardo...even a Corona would do ha.. ![]() Midnightsun..Gracias to you too..glad you enjoyed ![]() [This message has been edited by Victoria (edited 10-18-2001).] |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
I love poems about being in love and this one sang with incredible beauty. Sensual passion fills your words. I hope the Senorita's dreams come true. ![]() Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
This is so cute I love it. |
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Victoria![]()
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
thank you startime and walker...so nice to hear from both of you.. ![]() ~Victoria~ |
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