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rwood
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since 2000-02-29

Posts 3793
Tennessee

0 posted 2001-10-17 09:59 PM

The sky now a frozen fiery opal
Dark clouds slivered the horizon
She cradled her bread as if an infant
Heading back through the fall infestation

Upwards she climbed back into her nest
Tossing keys and shedding on the hall table
She created a sandwich, Dagwood would adore
Her image in the hall mirror bore comfort

Admiring herself with the holly still present
In locks of raven hair, that spiraled
Like melting licorice, flipping on Yanni
Filling the empty ceilings acoustical

The only light was the Dragon Fly
Cast by her antique Tiffany lamp
The room drenched in shades of honey
She dined, until the bursting of white

The laser like glow of an eerie current
Rose her to seek the source of burn
It laced the room in a summer sheer of day
Feeling as if morn had just crowed awake

But the clock handed her a dark hour
She drew to the window squinting
By the cheek solar heat to see
Her Stranger standing just below her

All things sparkled like that of wet
The streets, the cars, the sidewalks
Yet they were as dry as flannel cotton
Surely her window panes played tricks!

There before her on an autumn evening
A scene was staged to bewilder
Coming from the center of His heart
An explosion of ethereal brilliance

With a wave of his hand he disappeared
Leaving her filtered with the blueness
Of a neon moon that hung like a tea cup
Spilling black light into her vespertine

Denise

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

1 posted 2001-10-17 10:11 PM

This is fantastic, Regina! Wow! Very well written!

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

2 posted 2001-10-17 10:15 PM

BRAVO!!! You write the most beautiful visions with such heart and such beauty! (big hugggssssss) I saw the dragonfly dancing in the sky like a ballerina! (smiles) I LOVE IT!!! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Regina, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Startime
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since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

3 posted 2001-10-17 11:19 PM

*sigh* a visual masterpiece. I love it.

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

WRBreezin
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since 2001-08-04

Posts 212

4 posted 2001-10-18 05:39 AM

I would say "Bronte" has wooed this reader with her closing thoughts. Compelling, as ever.

Willie B

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

5 posted 2001-10-18 08:38 AM

Wonderfully painted filled with the gift of story telling and the images of a poet. You dear lady...have a talent few possess...the ability to string together a series of poems..telling a story with each as captivating as the first. my hat is off...not only to the lady...but the poet that shares with us such wonderful works...

[This message has been edited by Cpat Hair (edited 10-18-2001).]

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

6 posted 2001-10-18 09:07 AM

You are creating a story with a talent that all the Ladies are most envious of - so keep them coming....

Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

7 posted 2001-10-18 03:59 PM

shaking my head and agreeing with sunshine, yep, I am indeed envious but grateful of your abilities!! wonderful stuff somh!!

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

(I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth)

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

8 posted 2001-10-18 04:29 PM

vespertinal one
don't know if you saw my wave
could you see me smile
~*~
I must hurry now
leaving you to your own thoughts
but I shall return

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

rwood
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since 2000-02-29

Posts 3793
Tennessee

9 posted 2001-10-18 08:11 PM

Denise: I appreciate you so!!!

Noah: Just for you sweet one!!!

Karen: You are very kind and generous to me...Thank you!!

Willie: So thrilled I'm compelling you!

Cpat: You are so captivating to my heart. I wish I could take such credit...I wish only to continue this without letting her go down in ashes. Totally new to me...but you are my faithfull soul!! Your support is overwhelming.

Sunshine: Each of us a sparkle in the sky shining just as bright as the other...just know that it only comes because of the acceptance from the beautiful poets here. It's amazing what people can do when they are comfortable with themselves. Thank you for making me feel that way!

Donna: What I do...you can do...and I look on with pride..~S~O~M~H!!!

Interloper: Your smile is bright and your wave is reassuring of my journey! So glad you are here.

Sincerely,
Regina

Sven

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since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

10 posted 2001-10-18 10:47 PM

a different light indeed. . .

you make her come alive here. . . it's like looking into her. . . wonderful. . .

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