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Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

0 posted 2001-10-17 11:12 PM

Sigh.....looking over the landscape, in search of a lost love.
Seeing all the faces smiling, the couples sharing laughter.
Asking that I might again find love, might feel love.
Sitting upon a bench, head bowed, a tear falling from an eye.

A shadow approached me, covering the brightness from above.
I ignored it, hoping that the person would go away, just leave.
But, I could not help but notice the fragrance that I sensed.
The fragrance reminded of a love I had left behind, had lost.

Memories of a face, smiling endlessly through the brightest eyes.
Cheekbones so high, accenting a smile that said friendship.
Eyes looking into the soul of a woman with the purest heart.
A voice ever knowing of my needs, never wavering, always kind.

Memories of so many moments, the laughter, the giggling.
The times on a lawn chasing, running, breathless kisses.
Hair flowing endlessly into the air, teasing my face.
Lips of the most pure taste, accented in a reddish hue.

I remember her walk, the look that she first gave me.
It said to me......Caution, lady onboard, do not tread on.
I always respected this lady, for she was a true belle.
I think of a bell, a bell of mourning, of loss.

I lost her long ago, she left one day, parts unknown.
Heard many times she was here, there or somewhere.
Tried to find an address from a friend, return to sender.
Searched for years, nothing, but I did not give up.

I decided that since the shadow would not leave, I might look.
I didn’t find her, she is here, standing over me. Smiling eyes.

Startime
Member Ascendant

since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

1 posted 2001-10-17 11:18 PM

I am so glad you found your lost love and that she can put a smile on your face and in your heart. Beautiful writing, as always.

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

[This message has been edited by Startime (edited 10-17-2001).]

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

2 posted 2001-10-17 11:21 PM

(big hugggssssssss) Oh Magnus, rhis is so so sad but also so beautiful! (sad sigh) You speak of her grace and beauty so wonderfully through tears and laughter of memories you shared! (big hugggsssssss) Oh Magnus, my heart goes out to you, but I just know with a golden loving heart like yours you will again rejoice in the magic of love! (big hugggsssssss) God Bless You, sweet Magnus, you're such a loving friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

RosePetal

Member Elite

since 2001-08-26

Posts 2985
South Florida

3 posted 2001-10-17 11:22 PM

Not to echo Startime but I am happy you found her too!

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

4 posted 2001-10-17 11:23 PM

Thanx Karen....my love is always here.
Here inside me, in a special place.

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

5 posted 2001-10-17 11:28 PM

Thank you for the gracious words Rosepetal.

In truth, I have never lost her.

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

6 posted 2001-10-17 11:34 PM

Lost love, found love, love never lost. You cover a lot of emotional territory in this one, but leave us with a feeling of hope. Thanks. And this is really nice imagery:

"Memories of so many moments, the laughter, the giggling.
The times on a lawn chasing, running, breathless kisses.
Hair flowing endlessly into the air, teasing my face.
Lips of the most pure taste, accented in a reddish hue"

[This message has been edited by Midnitesun (edited 10-17-2001).]

Tracey
Member Elite

since 2001-08-29

Posts 2808
where insanity meets breeding

7 posted 2001-10-17 11:44 PM

I'm searching for the words to say...this touched me. I lost a love when I went to parts unknown. I tried to find him again, but he had moved, so this really hits a spot. Beautifully written

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

Dee
Member Elite

since 2000-08-19

Posts 2330
Queensland, Australia

8 posted 2001-10-18 08:14 AM

A beautiful story, Magnus. Love and hope...what more could we want?

Dee

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

9 posted 2001-10-18 10:27 AM

this is outstanding!

I really love this, have memories very close to this myself....

MyEnchanted_Melody
Senior Member

since 2001-05-30

Posts 1106
across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be.

10 posted 2001-10-18 12:36 PM

Oh....You have really touched my heart with this one.
Sad.....but so beautiful and exquisite.

Thank you
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sunshinemist
Senior Member

since 2001-09-29

Posts 595
Fl. sunshines early mist

11 posted 2001-10-18 12:37 PM

Magnus, Wonderful write! Enjoyed

~hugs Marie~

smiles ~Marie~
happiness is contentment of the heart

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

12 posted 2001-10-18 12:41 PM

Magnus...wonderful write which I think we can all relate to. Thank you for this treasure! ~hugs, Nancy~

~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

13 posted 2001-10-18 01:26 PM

Oh Magnus, this one really touched my heart. Very nice. Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

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