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Jon Mewett
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since 2000-03-04
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0 posted 2001-10-18 11:59 AM


It’s in my secret heart
That’s where my love resides
I store it all up
I memorise the moments
I recall your sun kissed hair
I feel your electric touch
The wisdom of your words
The moments of loosing my grip
The one lost word
The fleeting glance
The knowing look
The melting smile
I can feel the truth
I can touch the stars
I can skirt the moon
I can call a retreat
I can mount an attack
I can smell victory
Cry defeat
I can relive our time
Because I know

It’s in my secret heart
Jon Mewett


All these moments
In time
Will be Lost
Like Tears in the rain

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Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113
Canada eh.
1 posted 2001-10-18 12:02 PM


Jon, this is very beautiful!!  How I love 'knowing looks'.  YES!!  ~Hugs, Nancy~

~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~
  

MyEnchanted_Melody
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since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106
across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be.
2 posted 2001-10-18 12:06 PM




I can smell victory
Cry defeat
I can relive our time
Because I know

It’s in my secret heart

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And I can certainly see the beauty of your words all the way through...

Lovely....

Thank you
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Member Patricius
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962
just out of reach
3 posted 2001-10-18 01:33 PM


Jon, "the moments of losing my grip" wow, I have often wondered if a woman could really make a man feel this way. You have written this so well. I love it!! Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

jwesley
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563
Spring, Texas
4 posted 2001-10-18 01:42 PM


Well and truly said, my friend.

jwesley

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