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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(It was nice knowing all of you; I guess no one cares about me anymore here. I wish you all love and light)  Jaded By: Noah Eaton 10/17/01 It is cold outside, I walk on the field alone Like the last one to leave from an evening amusement park I can't seem to dream anymore, and so I might as well be lonely And I can't help but shiver When the wind chill comes in And makes me quiver... Help me stand up straight I feel jaded, I must be hopeless It's getting late I can't help but cry over this so often Will I ever be helped, I need this... Seems that the days are going by much faster And all the leaves are falling from the trees, dreams growing stale Sunsets don't seem as uplifting as they used to And I can't help but shiver When the wind chill comes in And makes me quiver... Help me stand up straight I feel jaded, I must be hopeless It's getting late I can't help but cry over this so often Will I ever be helped, I need this... The last autumn rain begins to fall, it feel so heavy And my sister moon won't go out to play tonight I'm on collision with every lament I ever cried But the stars aren't twinkling... Help me stand up straight I feel jaded, I must be hopeless It's getting late I can't help but cry over this so often Will I ever be helped, I need this... I need this... I guess I'm not meant to be happy... |
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Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Noah, you are a great writer, don't ever give up. We touch people even when we don't know that we do. Numbers are meaningless. Touching even one soul with beauty is worth the effort of writing. You have touched mine many times. (((HUGS))) |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Very well written...felt as if I were the speaker.... jwesley |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
Your beautiful visions always touch everyone, Noah. This poem is no exception. Very well done. Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Oh, dear poet, for so long I have written things that no one reads, or even knows that I have done. If it makes YOU feel good, that is all that counts. But, please share more with us. Take heart. Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
I love your writing and you are needed and well like here. I did like this one as well. ~hugs, Nancy~ ~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~ |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
Should I stay or should I go? |
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Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
You should stay, of course! |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Oh, this is just so melancholy, and sadly I relate to your words...I feel this way from time to time. Noah, please don't leave, it would be a great loss to passions...you are a talented writer and a darn sweet replier!  You are very much appreciated! ~Hugs~Take care, Melissa~ "Poetry is not an opinion expressed... |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
I would be so happy if you would stay and if you would write... always!!! I'm slow and terribly behind but I would still look for you! You still shine  Sincerely, Regina |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
"I'm on collision with every lament I ever cried" Oh, dear Noah ... if I had a nickle for every time I've felt this way ... sigh. You've captured this feeling of sorrow well, and touched a piece of me this morning with your words. Thank you. Best wishes and hugs, /Kit |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
Noah, people read but sometimes they don't respond because they don't spend alot of time in PIP. Is not quantity but quality that counts.When I post I never expect much responces, and I appreciate even one. You are a great writer poet, keep writing, we have to.Thanks for your poetry.  |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
You know very well when this was written it should have been tucked away ~ now, get to that exercise... |
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cpalmer Senior Member
since 2001-06-26
Posts 977Phoenix, Az |
Noah, I agree with walker...sometimes we read and don't respond cause we don't always have the time...you are wonderful poet, don't ever stop writing and PLEASE don't leave passions! Your words touch all of us a special way (sigh) I would be sad if you left! (huggglllesss!) don't leave, smile to know that you are loved here I do believe we have all felt this way one time or anotherCindi |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
Hey Noah ... you can't leave. I just got here and need you to show me the ropes. It may take sometime but I promise to be fair in my replies. You have much to offer wherever you choose to shine ... it would be great to follow your light here. Please stay and show me around? |
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