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Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

0 posted 2001-10-17 04:24 PM

Traversing the pathway of life two walking together.
Skipping over cracks, stones, occasional large rocks.
Keeping foot time to a musical melody of life.
Seeing all of the wonderful things we have.

Wandering along, talking about past times.
Remembering all of the wise and not so wise choices.
Smiling at the funny events, silly things said, remembered.
Keeping life’s journal locked away in two hearts.

Crying an occasional shared tear over family matters.
Worrying about where your life, you are headed.
Thinking how to make struggles go away, remain there.
Knowing that in the end, all will work out, somehow.

Loving deep over many years of sharing, laughing.
Still attracted by a powerful flame burning bright.
Fanning the flames on flings shared by two as one.
Smiling as both lie awake, holding close, soft.

Living in an existence requiring great commitment.
Where feelings are shared, felt, given freely.
Knowing that harsh words are spoken only briefly
That true love softens them, erasing with time.

Still walking and skipping, the rocks are smaller.
The steps no longer springy as once was ago.
The commitment ever strong and devoted
For down life’s path, two in love go freely.

wayoutwalt
Member Elite

since 1999-06-22

Posts 4870
TEXAS (it's all big)

1 posted 2001-10-17 04:25 PM

its good that you took the road and kept the way and nice poem o yuh!

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

2 posted 2001-10-17 04:29 PM

Thanx Wayout....

I have a beautiful woman here at home with me
that has been on our journey for 36 years of
my life. Her name is Lou....She is a wonderful lady. Thanx again.

Dee
Member Elite

since 2000-08-19

Posts 2330
Queensland, Australia

3 posted 2001-10-17 04:41 PM

Magnus, what a beautiful way of looking at life. You have excelled yourself, sir.

Dee

I wish you every happiness and may you always have the best of the good things in life. a brand

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

4 posted 2001-10-17 05:28 PM

Thanx Dee....This woman has graced me with
her presence for a very long time. She
has walked all of our roads beside me, no
matter the turbulence or bumpiness. I
am grateful to her for that.

sunshinemist
Senior Member

since 2001-09-29

Posts 595
Fl. sunshines early mist

5 posted 2001-10-17 06:01 PM

Magnus, This is most gracious write! You are indeed a lucky man to have such a woman for 36 years. Thank you for sharing this poem!
Hugs ~Marie~

smiles ~Marie~
happiness is contentment of the heart

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

6 posted 2001-10-17 06:06 PM

Living in an existence requiring great commitment.
Where feelings are shared, felt, given freely.
Knowing that harsh words are spoken only briefly
That true love softens them, erasing with time.

Still walking and skipping, the rocks are smaller.
The steps no longer springy as once was ago.
The commitment ever strong and devoted
For down life’s path, two in love go freely.
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Oh how I love this Magnus! This has to be one of your best...if not THE best! Brilliant indeed. Enjoyed so very much!
~warm hugs, Nancy~

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