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Suetang
Member Ascendant

since 2001-03-07

Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia

0 posted 2001-10-15 08:46 PM

You are the sun behind the clouds
On a cold Winter's day
You are the reason why I smile
As you chase my blues away

You are the treasures of the ocean
Hidden deep below the sea
Your love is like a precious gift
That has been bestowed upon me

You are the lyrics of a love song
Penned from a musician's hand
How you capture my attention
As our hearts now take command

You are the music in my heart
That plays love's heavenly tune
In your presence I could fly
And reach up and touch the moon

Suetang

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

1 posted 2001-10-15 08:50 PM

You are the music in my heart
That plays love's heavenly tune
In your presence I could fly
And reach up and touch the moon
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Lovely Sue. Very nicely penned. ~Nancy~

~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~

Chelsea~
Member

since 2001-02-09

Posts 260
Ontario, CANADA

2 posted 2001-10-15 09:08 PM

suetang,

a very sweet and lovely
poem!

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

3 posted 2001-10-15 09:17 PM

Suetang....Geez....this is good...and flows
well...I like the words and how you have expressed them. There is a lot of love within.

Tiersdin
Member Elite

since 2000-11-17

Posts 2364
east coast

4 posted 2001-10-15 09:33 PM

Isn't love grand? *smiles*

Lovely write, Suetang...

*smiles*

~Tier

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

5 posted 2001-10-16 03:09 AM

Lovely message...James

Startime
Member Ascendant

since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

6 posted 2001-10-16 09:33 AM

The love in your words flows like sweet music. I love this poem and the love and romance so wonderful shown in it.

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

SmartChick
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-09-23

Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown

7 posted 2001-10-16 09:48 AM

Very good. I like this. Thank you for sharing it.

rwood
Member Elite

since 2000-02-29

Posts 3793
Tennessee

8 posted 2001-10-17 06:37 AM

I'm sincere when I say you should write for greeting cards. Your sentiments are always appreciated and seem so perfect to present to a special loved one. Perfectly indeed.

Sincerely,
Regina

wayoutwalt
Member Elite

since 1999-06-22

Posts 4870
TEXAS (it's all big)

9 posted 2001-10-17 08:59 AM

O yuh the music of a booster to the moon. nice

Topheth
Member

since 2001-09-08

Posts 297
Texas

10 posted 2001-10-17 05:57 PM

Nicely penned - enjoyed!

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