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Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

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South Carolina, USA

0 posted 2001-10-13 08:09 PM

A goddess stands in search of love
Gentle breezes caressing golden hair.
Toes daintily tickled by lapping waves.
Searching for a lover’s call from afar.

Across the distance of the waves
a young man stares toward a distant shore.
Breezes flowing through the soul
He waits for a most joyful and sensual sight.

Minds becoming one, calling over the seas
Waiting for the response of a distant lover.
Calling anxiously, listening for a word.
Both stand at ocean’s edge, toes tickled by salty hands.

A gentle sigh as each waits for the words of love.
Two hearts waiting for an answered call.
Thinking of only the other as each waits.
Yearning for the touch of a gentle embrace.

I.....a single word heard by two minds, anxious.
Only....hearts pound as the next is anticipated.
Love....sighs audibly heard as hearts pound.
You....A smile, a tear escapes, standing still.

Distant loves depart the sea, satisfied for now.
Anxiously awaiting the next sun’s set.
A treasured moon passing through cotton skies.
Two shadows fade into a cool night.
Love awaits the falling of a golden sun.

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

1 posted 2001-10-13 08:27 PM

I.....a single word heard by two minds, anxious.
Only....hearts pound as the next is anticipated.
Love....sighs audibly heard as hearts pound.
You....A smile, a tear escapes, standing still.
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MAGNUS!!! Now this one absolutely sings to me!! This is an amazing write my friend. And how I love to have my toes tickled....oh sorry, um, an exquisite write sire. You took my breath away....again! ~NancyLee~

~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~

Sven

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since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

2 posted 2001-10-13 08:37 PM

yes. . . well done. . .a story well told. . .

excellent. . . reminds me of the myths and legends that I've been reading about lately. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

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Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

3 posted 2001-10-13 08:41 PM

Remind me to post the sequel to this 2morrow.
I think you will enjoy it as well.....Thanx
Nancy Lee.....Your kindness overwhelms and
inspires me.

Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

4 posted 2001-10-13 08:43 PM

Thanx Sven....I cannot say where I got the
idea to write this....but I too enjoy that
type of story line.

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

5 posted 2001-10-13 09:35 PM

this brought tears to my eyes....have had dreams like this....hearing his voice in the ocean's breeze....this is so amazing....loved this

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Startime
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since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

6 posted 2001-10-13 09:46 PM

*sigh* filled with magic and sensual love. You touch the heart easily with your words, Magnus. I love this romantic masterpiece.

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

7 posted 2001-10-13 09:53 PM

Susan....gee....I sorta like the pen name too.  SEA....(grins)....just kiddin'
Thanx...I am happy to know that you have
thoroughly enjoyed my words of fantasy romance and love.

Startime---ditto, ditto, ditto,  all the
same and more....glad you liked it...
Sit back and enjoy....the romance will continue.  My pen has lots of ink left.

serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

8 posted 2001-10-14 04:10 AM

Sort of on the same wavelength...(sigh..I SWEAR the puns just write themselves!)

This explains the haunting call of the sea...
smiling here...there is much Goddess about tonight!

Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

9 posted 2001-10-14 09:38 AM

Serenity....and yes,,,there will be more
Godess, just a different night...Thanx,
happy you enjoyed.

Dee
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since 2000-08-19

Posts 2330
Queensland, Australia

10 posted 2001-10-15 08:11 AM

Magnus, this is truely beautiful. I am very quickly becoming a fan

Into the library it goes.

Dee

I wish you every happiness and may you always have the best of the good things in life. a brand

Temptress

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-06-15

Posts 7136
Mobile, AL

11 posted 2001-10-15 06:43 PM

This is just delightful!

For some reason, these days I have the ease of mind to read love poetry and not make a sour face!

*Jenn*

Sometimes the heart needs the solace of solitude and silence.

Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

12 posted 2001-10-15 07:25 PM

Dee....I am beginning to believe that you
really do enjoy my romance poems....Your
kind words have echoed thru my mind over
and over again. Thanx...

Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

13 posted 2001-10-15 07:26 PM

Jenn.....now I have a name....thank you...
thank you, thank you, thank you...over and
over....puts a smile on my face...

rwood
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since 2000-02-29

Posts 3793
Tennessee

14 posted 2001-10-16 10:10 PM

I.....a single word heard by two minds, anxious.
Only....hearts pound as the next is anticipated.
Love....sighs audibly heard as hearts pound.
You....A smile, a tear escapes, standing still.

Would this not make the most beautiful sentiment in a card!!!!! The whole poem was moving but this verse just pulls you in. I want them to find each other....

Sincerely,
Regina

Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

15 posted 2001-10-16 10:16 PM

Thanx Regina....Yes, that is one part of the
poem that touches me too....

They may find each other...The pen strokes
the words from the mind and heart.

Greeneyes

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since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

16 posted 2001-10-16 10:41 PM

I.....a single word heard by two minds, anxious.
Only....hearts pound as the next is anticipated.
Love....sighs audibly heard as hearts pound.
You....A smile, a tear escapes, standing still"

I like your weave of words here, and how you placed this into your poem....lovely!!

I keep my ideals,
because in spite of everything,
I still believe that
people are really good at heart.
Anne Frank
09*12*01

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Mysteria

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since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

17 posted 2001-10-17 12:07 PM

This was a lovely piece, everyone needs to read of love sometime - and this was beautiful Magnus.

~I always have time to listen to someone talking from their heart~

Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

18 posted 2001-10-17 05:46 PM

Thank you Greeneyes....yes that is a special
part of the poem for me as well.

Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

19 posted 2001-10-17 05:47 PM

You are welcome Mysteria....I am happy that
you enjoyed this.

Suetang
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since 2001-03-07

Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia

20 posted 2001-10-17 06:04 PM

Magnus
This would have to be the epitome of romance with the wonderful words you have weaved.
I absolutely loved this and felt myself being swept away with the moment.
Take care.....Sue

Suetang

sunshinemist
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since 2001-09-29

Posts 595
Fl. sunshines early mist

21 posted 2001-10-17 06:07 PM

Magnus, Beautiful poem of love! Enjoyed.

~hugs Marie~

smiles ~Marie~
happiness is contentment of the heart

Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

22 posted 2001-10-17 06:21 PM

Suetang.....thanx bunches for the beautiful
words that touch my heart...

Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

23 posted 2001-10-17 06:22 PM

Thanx Marie....happy that you liked the
read....I enjoyed it as well during each
word as I wrote them.

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