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Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

0 posted 2001-10-16 04:00 PM

For Awhile

Tickle me
with your laughter
Pamper me
with your charms
Dazzle me
with your manliness
Then release me
from your arms.
Caress me
with your words
Warm me
with your smile
Heal me
with your sweet kiss
Then leave me....
for awhile.

[This message has been edited by Nightshade (edited 10-16-2001).]

Startime
Member Ascendant

since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

1 posted 2001-10-16 04:02 PM

WOW!!!this is outstanding. Very well done. I love the way it flows. You sure tell it like it is. LOL BRAVO!!!

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

2 posted 2001-10-16 04:04 PM

first to my arms fly
let lips meld and facade melt
we shall part smiling

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

3 posted 2001-10-16 04:06 PM

Startime - thankyou so much.
Interloper - you cheeky devil - thanks!

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

4 posted 2001-10-16 07:19 PM

Ah Chris...I love this and you know it!! What's this? A reply from Interloper with a poem of his own? Hummm, interesting!
Love ya, Teed.

To the top you go!

~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~

sunshinemist
Senior Member

since 2001-09-29

Posts 595
Fl. sunshines early mist

5 posted 2001-10-16 07:24 PM

Nightshade, this had a wondeful flow to it. Enjoyed! ~hugs~

smiles ~Marie~
happiness is contentment of the heart

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

6 posted 2001-10-16 08:17 PM

NancyLee, Thankyou for your response. Interloper can write me a poem anytime. hugs, Chris

Sunshinemist - Many thanks for liking this. Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

wayoutwalt
Member Elite

since 1999-06-22

Posts 4870
TEXAS (it's all big)

7 posted 2001-10-17 04:14 PM

so thaz it thaz what women want OH YUH! really good write imho

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

8 posted 2001-10-17 04:26 PM

lol...thankyou dear walt. Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

Larry C

Member Patricius

since 2001-09-10

Posts 10286
United States

9 posted 2001-10-17 11:42 PM

Chris,
I promise, no smothering here. Nice poem. I really enjoyed it.

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

10 posted 2001-10-18 10:33 AM

Larry - Don't you dare smother me....wrap me up in a blanket maybe...don't smother me.

Thanks for commenting, Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

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