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Open Poetry #16

returning The Pleasure

HopeS
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since 2000-12-22

Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia

0 posted 2001-10-18 09:20 AM

Returning The Pleasure

Caressing with whispers
Touching everywhere
Returning the pleasure
In wishing I was there

The warmth of feelings
We tenderly express
Returning the pleasure
Each whispered caress

Our sharing sentiments
Rendevous meetings
Returning the pleasure
Of feelings in greetings

Soft signs of affection
Whenever we spoke
Returning the pleasure
With each gentle stroke

Attached here forever
In worded embrace
Returning the pleasure
My heart finds a place

Hope ©2001

Startime
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since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

1 posted 2001-10-18 09:23 AM

WOW!!!You sure do know how to write romance. The tender love in this poem gives your reader a great deal of pleasure. I love it. Well done, dear one.

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Dee
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since 2000-08-19

Posts 2330
Queensland, Australia

2 posted 2001-10-18 09:39 AM

Hope, beautiful romantic words from you pen, my girl. Well done, he is one lucky man to have you feel this way for him.

Dee

PS. It wouldn't be Rob from Gosford would it?

I wish you every happiness and may you always have the best of the good things in life. a brand

HopeS
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since 2000-12-22

Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia

3 posted 2001-10-18 09:52 AM

Hey thanks Dee , no its not Rob , this guy is not even an
Aussie
Hope
I could give you Rob's ICQ , last i heard he was looking LOL and he does
enjoy poetry

HopeS
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since 2000-12-22

Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia

4 posted 2001-10-18 09:54 AM

Thanks Karen ,romance can be easy to write when there is someone
to recieve , although I can quite easily write of sadness too
Hope

Sunshine

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Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

5 posted 2001-10-18 09:57 AM

And the beauty is well seen in your heart. Enjoyed this...

SmartChick
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since 2001-09-23

Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown

6 posted 2001-10-18 10:12 AM

A very good romanic poem. Enjoyed reading.

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