Our love--- In the bright blue skies

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Open Poetry #16

Our love--- In the bright blue skies

walker
Member Elite

since 2001-02-11

Posts 2240
Florida

0 posted 2001-10-15 04:45 PM

I wish
with this kiss
I could make everything
good again
In a minute
with my passion
I'll give you
all my love
No words just love
I can't take no
for an answer
I'll
kiss and kiss
until in bliss
you admit
that my love had
made a difference
in your life
Long ago
I heard your call
and responded with my love
Now I cannot stand alone
That is why
with this kiss
I promise
I'll give you all you need
I'll take you
up there in the sky
where heaven awaits
for our embrace
High in the
bright blue skies

sunshinemist
Senior Member

since 2001-09-29

Posts 595
Fl. sunshines early mist

1 posted 2001-10-15 06:35 PM

Walker, A very lovely romantic write. Enjoyed.

~hugs~

smiles ~Marie~
happiness is contentment of the heart

Duncan
Member Ascendant

since 2001-08-07

Posts 5455

2 posted 2001-10-15 11:54 PM

I'll give you
all my love
No words just love
I can't take no
for an answer
I'll
kiss and kiss
until in bliss
you admit
that my love had
made a difference
in your life

walker, love this poem, especially this part. What a kiss that is going to be!

Heather Miller
Member

since 2000-07-19

Posts 409
Bryan, Ohio USA

3 posted 2001-10-15 11:57 PM

Oh My, that would sweep me off my feet

Heather (CherokeeGirl)

Without the experiance of love where would we be? We would have no memories to cherish.
With love it brings hurt with hurt bittersweet memories.

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

4 posted 2001-10-16 03:14 AM

From the sound of this kiss you must really like this person...have fun....James

Startime
Member Ascendant

since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

5 posted 2001-10-16 09:40 AM

*sigh* it is simply amazing what a kiss can do and it sounds like this is going to be the ultimate kiss. Wonderful. I hope all works out the way you desire.

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

SmartChick
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-09-23

Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown

6 posted 2001-10-16 09:41 AM

A beautiful romantic poem. It would definitely sweep me right off my feet.

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