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Mourning of Kisses #1
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Mourning of Kisses #1 |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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Seduction Kisses when morning light had just about broken and the kisses of your words would enter the dawning, my heart would light up in *softsmiles*... and thought kisses I would send in return. Never knowing if they were received, as they were meant to be. Now... I watch as others repeat the words I first expressed upon reading you each morning, and I smile again. Remembering... Wondering... What has happened to that specialness between us? Is it hidden deep in the shadows of darkness, awaiting temptation's exposure or have the images aged and become edge-frayed, worn from neglect, crumpled from despair, rendering them useless? Silence is heard loudly, kiss words are nil, filling my heart with the seduction of emptiness... once more. ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Tis true of what happens to our words. They like dormant, become forgotten. Do you think they too are lonely. Looking for a returned word. Nice. I liked this read. |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
Seduction of emptiness, A voiding, So liken to the darkness. your words are always special Enjoyed reading familiar words In an unfamiliar place I am. Gloom |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Such a tender write Maureen ... one can feel the longing through these words, very nicely written.  Best wishes, /Kit |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
a beautiful expression of one's longing thanks for the wonderful read keep it up hi Sweets/puff puff/bubbles  , Lizzy  , Jesa  , Ina  , Allysa  , Marie  , Cherish  , Jenn  , Minna  , Chelsea  , Leah  , Kimmie  , Ashley  , Smurfy  , Alexia  , Kamie  , Kari  , Nan  , Sea  , Javi  , Zu  , Lml  , Albertia  , Linc  , Jesse  , |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
Many questions within this poem yearning for the right answers. Very emotion filled. You write straight from the heart and touch all those who read your words. Very well done. I hope you get the answers you desire. Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Magnus...the "seduction of words" is so very strong, their meanings so very personal. Thank you *s Professor ..I live in a void...or maybe I could be titiled the Great A Voider. and I am always in an unfmiliar place (in life)Thank you,Sir. Kit...ah I should be ten foot tall with all the longing I hold. *s Thank you. acire ...nice to see you here *s...you never seem to be longing with all those faces you share in smiles. Thank you for the visit and kind words. Startime...answers may come in time if I have enough of it left *s thank you. ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". |
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