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Open Poetry #16

Desire Becomes Life

Startime
Member Ascendant

since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

0 posted 2001-10-14 07:15 PM

Desire Becomes Life

A gasp becomes a shout
look skyward I would share
brilliance streaks the darkness
A gasp becomes a stare

A stare becomes a dream
making my heart to spin
wrapped in fantasy
A stare becomes a grin

A grin becomes a smile
your eyes light my skies
with sparkles of delight
A grin becomes a sigh

A sigh becomes a moan
your touch sets the fire
kissed from lover's lips
A sigh becomes desire

Desire becomes love
free from all hurt and strife
passions flow deep within
Desire becomes life

Karen Torbiak

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

1 posted 2001-10-14 07:57 PM

OH yes....how passionate love becomes through all of the stages. A truly romantic
read....Thank you poetic lady, you make this
man's heart beat faster.

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

2 posted 2001-10-14 08:02 PM

Karen, you really know how to show all of the stages. . .

this is just wonderful. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

SmartChick
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-09-23

Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown

3 posted 2001-10-15 09:46 AM

This is just beautiful. I love to read you poems.

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