Open Poetry #16 |
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A lady is moved |
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The Lady of Shallot Senior Member
since 2001-10-03
Posts 818USA |
![]() 151 feet of cold iron and copper, untouched by time, composed through the elements, has been moved. Her eyes blink, her skin bumps, her body trembles because there is a new force rushing through her veins. For one moment, perhaps one moment given by fury, or providence, she speaks… “I stand beside a golden door, and I am still standing! I speak for all people, free and slave, of color and white, wealthy and impoverished, young and aged who have gathered here from seven continents. I lift my torch to signify our lands need enlightenment. My torch remains flamed! For this light is not lit from the cold, twisted, void of oppression. My torch cannot be extinguished for it is fueled with the spirit of freedom from the hearts and souls of every American. Those who have spilled their blood so that our children can play safely, those who have lost their limbs on foreign soil, those who have fed, ministered, wept and sacrificed so that others may enter through this door. I lift my torch defying evil. I hold it high before those who would craft the destruction of a people who have remained strong through the grace of Almighty God. And I vow, though weeping, to remain standing…..brave. Wthout bravery, there is no honor without safety there is no hope without tolerance there is no peace, but without justice there is no freedom. -befriend yourself and you will never be alone- |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
"My torch cannot be extinguished for it is fueled with the spirit of freedom from the hearts and souls of every American." Beautiful phrasing Lady of Shallot. Your sentiments reach deep into patriotic hearts and warm them through the strength in your message, very nicely written. ![]() Best wishes, /Kit |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
She does not stand alone, when she has your pen to speak through... well done, Lady, well done, indeed... |
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WindWalker Senior Member
since 2001-10-12
Posts 1218 |
This was a good read!!!!!!! |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
![]() (smiles) BRAVO!!! (big hugggssssss) Oh my gosh, this is such a beautifully patriotic and wonderful poem of hope and love! She is a very loving woman indeed, and liberty and justice will always be clasped under her arm and held high in her hand of light! (smiles) BRAVO!!! God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Nightshade![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Dear Lady, yes, I believe this noble lady has certainly shed a few tears. You have written this wonderfully. Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Lady--I think you speak for many who view this symbol as you have so beautifully worded in this poem. Thank you for that. |
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Mysteria![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
You are doing such a wonderful job of your poetry in trying to raise the spirits of not only the American people but all of us. This is another fantastic poem to refuel the soul with hope for the future, and realize that which built the past, will also build the future. Excellent write. ~I always have time to listen to someone talking from their heart~ |
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Midnitesun![]()
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
My hats off to both of you ladies. And I really liked that last line: 'Without bravery, there is no honor without safety there is no hope without tolerance there is no peace, but without justice there is no freedom.' Thank you for this. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
You say it well...James |
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The Lady of Shallot Senior Member
since 2001-10-03
Posts 818USA |
Kit, thank you. At times when everything seems to have returned to normal, I know that it hasn’t entirely and I lose myself in my writing. Sunshine, thank you for replying. Windwalker, I’m glad you felt that way, thank you Noah, thank you, you have such a warm spirit. Chris, I believe she has also, thank you for reading and responding. Martie, it is my pleasure to write, it is what I love to do and I thank you for replying. Mysteria, thank you very much dear lady for those encouraging words, sometimes I feel I can no longer write and when I do, I feel stronger. Mitnitesun, thank you I really do appreciate your kindness. James Michael, Aloha and thank you !!! -befriend yourself and you will never be alone- |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
Her door will forever be knocked upon but not knocked down. Even when time has reduced us all to dust...that door will still remain. Wonderful.......Superb. Sincerely, Regina |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
LadyOfShallot~ 'Wthout bravery, there is no honor without safety there is no hope without tolerance there is no peace, but without justice there is no freedom.' And ... this lady is moved by the beauty of your words~ Thank you~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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The Lady of Shallot Senior Member
since 2001-10-03
Posts 818USA |
Regina, thank you I hope so. Marge, thank you, I still cry thinking about the entire thing.... -befriend yourself and you will never be alone- |
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Interloper![]() ![]()
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
A work after my own heart ![]() Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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The Lady of Shallot Senior Member
since 2001-10-03
Posts 818USA |
Interloper, thank you.....and may we never forget! -befriend yourself and you will never be alone- |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Lady of Shallot- This is excellent...a heartfelt and powerful write. You've penned the feelings well. Hugs, ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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The Lady of Shallot Senior Member
since 2001-10-03
Posts 818USA |
Thank you Vicky, I hope you get rain soon, it's raining here all over the leaves..! -befriend yourself and you will never be alone- |
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