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Mysteria

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0 posted 2001-10-11 03:45 PM

~* I Wish You Love *~

How I miss your arms around me,
the sweet breath of your sweet kiss.
I long to taste and smell you,
as we did in moments of tenderness.

I sit here in sorrow wondering,
why my best was not good enough,
to pull you from your stresses
when your life was going rough.

I tried so hard to protect you,
and to keep you safe from pain.
I thought we were forever,
and that I would share your name.

I wish this pain would go away,
that I could dull this aching heart.
They say it will, well maybe so,
the longer we are apart.

I don’t know why you left,
As I gave all I had to give,
You’ll hold a place in my heart,
As long as I may live.

I wish you all the best in life,
and hope in your travels you’ll find
someone who will be able
to ease your troubled mind.

Above all this I wish you love,
Search for it, and you will find.
If your road leads no where,
Remember that you left me behind.

midi: I Will Always Love You - courtesy of Dolphin's Dreams

~I always have time to listen to someone talking from their heart~
[This message has been edited by Mysteria (edited 10-11-2001).]

Greeneyes

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1 posted 2001-10-11 03:53 PM

This reminds me of the song I wish you love....inspiring dear mysteria....sad, but lovely...peace and hugs to you....

Lauren

Mysteria

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2 posted 2001-10-11 03:55 PM

Ah Lauren I forgot to put the name of the song, and you are right! It is "I Will Always Love You" originally done by Dolly Parton then, Whitney Houston, and it was playing on my CD so I wrote this at the same time! Thank you.

~I always have time to listen to someone talking from their heart~

[This message has been edited by Mysteria (edited 10-11-2001).]

Enchantress
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3 posted 2001-10-11 04:22 PM

Mysteria, beautiful, tender and, yes, sad as well.
Enjoyed so much! ~hugs, NancyLee~

~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~

Dee
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4 posted 2001-10-11 05:33 PM

Sharon another wow from me. I have not been in open enough lately. Now I know what I have been missing.

Dee

I wish you every happiness and may you always have the best of the good things in life. a brand

Heather Miller
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5 posted 2001-10-11 05:38 PM

Another beauty. Wonderful.

(I thought it was first sung by Dolly Parton? I could be wrong, wouldn't be the first, or last LOL)

Heather (CherokeeGirl)

Without the experiance of love where would we be? We would have no memories to cherish.
With love it brings hurt with hurt bittersweet memories.

[This message has been edited by Heather Miller (edited 10-11-2001).]

Mysteria

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6 posted 2001-10-11 05:58 PM

Enchantress ~ Glad you liked and it is always sad when a man never realizes what he left behind for greener pastures isn't it?

Dee ~ Stick around, there is some fabulous poetry coming up about one a minute now!  LOL, seriously there are so many good writers in here, I pale in comparison but that you.

Heather ~ You are absolutely right, but you get no prize   lol, it was even Dolly Parton that wrote it, and how could I forget that.  She is one the greastest songwriters of this era.  Thanks I fixed the post.

Greeneyes

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7 posted 2001-10-11 06:57 PM

Sharon I was actually referring to the song I wish you love by Barbara S, I think....you know the one...*L* I never even thought of I will always love you...but now that you mention it....I can hear it playing in the background....

Lauren

I keep my ideals,
because in spite of everything,
I still believe that
people are really good at heart.
Anne Frank
09*12*01

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Nightshade

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8 posted 2001-10-11 07:11 PM

Mysteria, This poem really touched me. I feel your longing.....the "not knowing why". I also understand you still wishing love to this confused and confusing spirit. Lovely, Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

Martie

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9 posted 2001-10-11 07:52 PM

Beautiful poem of love and loss, Sharon..so well done!

The Lady of Shallot
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10 posted 2001-10-11 07:56 PM

You said it so delicately. Wonderful phrasing here, Sharon, from the heart.

-befriend yourself and you will never be alone-

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11 posted 2001-10-11 07:58 PM

I don't know why I left you, girl.
I must have lost my head!
I let a girl with golden curls
Kidnap my heart, instead!

I didn't know she had tattoos
And thick hair down her back.
She spends the night chug-luggin' booze
And drinks beer by the pack!

Her belches would make foghorns weep
She never takes a bath...
Woe be to any kindred soul
Encountering her wrath.

She likes to bring her whips and chains
When we get in the sack...
So, if you mean the things you say,
For God's sake..TAKE ME BACK!!!

Sunshine

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12 posted 2001-10-11 08:45 PM

Mysteria, I shall wish you peace, and happiness...

Janet Marie
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13 posted 2001-10-11 09:24 PM

Sharon this is achingly beautiful...
very touching writing...
and the last lines show both a heart and door still open.
lovely writing poetess M...

and LOL@ Balladeer....
only he could make us smile when reading a sad poem.

When your own emptiness is all that's getting through
There comes a point when you're not sure why you're still talking
I passed that point long ago

Midnitesun

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14 posted 2001-10-11 09:25 PM

I was going to say something sweet and nice about this poem, which I really like, but then I read the Balladeer's post, and I'm still picking myself up...picturing you in his poem. ROTFLMAO over and over again.

Mysteria

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15 posted 2001-10-11 09:52 PM

Nightshade ~ LOL... that "longing" was the story of my life actually, three times, so now I have learned (and I meet their Mother first)

Martie ~ Thank you, and today you made me really smile with your poetry dear friend.

Lady of Shallot ~ Bitterness is not a way to ever end love, for it was a good thing to have loved, even once.  Thank you.

Sunshine ~ Would you ever wish anyone any less?  I think not, and I thank you.

~*~

now....Balladeer!

I don't know why you left me boy,
you must have lost your head,
to let a girl on a motorbike,
kidnap your heart, instead!

Her tattoos are really gross,
and I'm laughing 'bout her back.
I never knew a biker girl yet,
couldn't drink beer by the pack!

You see I set you up my "deer"
and that there is my sister,
she's the black sheep of our family,
and I sicked her on you mister!

She's beyond whips and chains
when she gets you in her sack...
You deserve all that you get,
Forget it...Don't come back!

This was great fun ~ ~ Thanks for the great poem Balladeer!

Mysteria

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16 posted 2001-10-11 10:44 PM

Janet Marie ~ it WOULD have been a sad little poem but for our resident prankster, oh well, this is more fun!

Midnitesun ~ Hey, don't feel badly, I am still laughing an hour later! Thanks for reading it.

Flutterwings
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17 posted 2001-10-11 11:25 PM

Hi! Sharon, I can see how you would have been inspired by this great picture.

. and wonderful melody. I also hear that from a broken heart only pieces of love can be poetically expressed... and I'm sure you've picked up those pieces more then once. But, to be honest with you... Whomever let you go, was some crazy, insane dude anyway... not deserving of your love. Just my 2 cents worth..

Maggie ((~.~)

Tracey
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18 posted 2001-10-11 11:31 PM

What a touchingly beautiful poem. You have penned my feelings here, and done it with such grace I might add.

And as for those other two poems by you and Baladeer...well, I'm just splitting my sides laughing. So on that note I'm going to bed

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

Balladeer

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19 posted 2001-10-11 11:42 PM

I like your poem...it's really super
Although you fed me to a Booper.
I shoulda known right when I kissed her
And split my lip she was your sister.
Now she's become a real bounty
Since I have learned to be her "mountie".

Mysteria

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20 posted 2001-10-12 12:12 PM

Maggie ~ Trust me no one ever left, I got them first! lol, but I did pick up the pieces to only do it again. Thanks for your wonderful words.

Tracey ~ Thank you for being serious for one minute on this poem. I am glad we made you smile, that makes it all worthwhile, lol.

Mountie Balladeer

You're now her mountie you say?
Do you remember Dudley do right?
Well okay...better remember to
use your flashlight at night!!!

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SmittenKitten
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21 posted 2001-10-12 01:49 AM

Sharon~ You find the most amazing pictures....and then they inspire you to write such lovely pieces!

And lol@you and Balladeer

too funny!

Hugs,
~Krista

Your beautiful words & creativity allow me to connect with the same in myself.
Thank you for having the courage to share yourself so that I can too

Kit McCallum

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22 posted 2001-10-12 06:19 AM

Beautiful and tender sentiments Sharon, with a lovely flow, very much enjoyed this.

(and lol @ you and Balladeer, great grins with my morning tea, LOL).

Best wishes,
/Kit

Elizabeth Santos
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23 posted 2001-10-12 07:31 AM

A very lovely poem
and an exceptionally entertaining post
Enjoyed! Thanks for cheering me up
Liz

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24 posted 2001-10-12 10:32 AM

Mysteria--

This was so very beautiful. Aching and longing in its sincerity. I tried
very hard not to cry when I read this...but tears fell anyways. That is
a good thing though.

LOL @ Baladeer--where do you come up with this kind of stuff
kind Sir. Thank you for the laughs though--seems this place could
do with one or two here lately!

Take care.
Amy

"I could kiss you in
the rain forever.
Turn all of your pain to pleasure
Fill up your days with
sunlight, make the
passion last every night"

Lady In White

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25 posted 2001-10-12 10:38 AM

Enjoyed the poem, but my goodness, I'm not sure if the tears came from it, or from the hilarity in the responses...

kudos to all of you!

Mysteria

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26 posted 2001-10-12 01:48 PM

Krista ~ I sent you links to graphics, and info - have fun!

Kit ~ We aim to please! Glad it entertained you this morning!

Elizabeth ~ If I cheered you some, well then you also have made my day.

Amy ~ This was to be a heartbreaker but you know Balladeer

he had to do this to me, and let's face it we all need a laugh once in a while. I will get him back

Lady in White ~ Tears of laughter are always nicer than those of sorrow aren't they?

Thank you all for having some fun!

~I always have time to listen to someone talking from their heart~

Martha Cowan
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27 posted 2001-10-13 06:42 PM

I am LMAO!!!!! Sharon...I read your beautiful poem, found myself wiping a tear or two, as I always do being the emotional wimpus that I am...(but, of course, you've seen that part of me in person, so you already know that)...
and then...I read the comments, and found myself laughing so hard I was crying again.
This should be placed in the "Passion's Hall of Fame"...for sure!
I love it!
Hugs and much love to you,
~*~dawn~*~

Mistletoe Angel

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28 posted 2001-10-13 06:49 PM

(big hugggsssssss) Oh Mysteria, this is so so sad but also so beautiful and so compassionate! (sad sigh) I'm so sorry you had to feel this way; your love will always be with him and I know he too will always wish you love! (sigh) You are a very beautiful and loving friend, sweet Mysteria, god bless you! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Mysteria, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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29 posted 2001-10-14 06:09 AM

Well, for once I am REALLY glad I arrived late on this one .. I wouldn't have missed the follow through on this for quids !!!
A wonderful poem Sharon, thankyou for sharing ! Earlier comments were so right, anyone who would let you go, well, they just ain't worth keeping themselves !
Love as always,
Andy XO

Marge Tindal

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30 posted 2001-10-14 09:10 AM

Mysteria~
Lovely thoughts from the beautifully inspired words of Ms.Dolly~
She wrote this lovely song when she and Porter Waggoner broke up their singing duo~
Has always been a favorite of mine~
Enjoyed~
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Nan

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31 posted 2001-10-14 11:18 AM

I'm not sure what I like best here... the original poem... Deer's response... your response to his response... his response to that... um... This is hilarious...

Mysteria

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32 posted 2001-10-14 01:54 PM

Your comments were simply amazing,
You're Passions friends, so true,
But this was just a simple, love poem,
that I tried to write for you.

See, she's my younger sister,
learned her tricks from the best,
So if Balladeer is playing "mountie"
That boy's gonna need a "rest"!!!

Thank you all for your fun comments. This was fun!

suthern

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33 posted 2001-10-15 05:03 PM

I loved this song before I ever lived it. *S* And your poem speaks for so many, Mysteria... if you truly love, you wish them forever in love's shelter... even if the arms aren't your own... and even if the smiles waver through tears. This was going into my library even before the giggle brigade got started. *G*

As for Bal.... dern it... you promised not to TELL!!!! Big sis don't wantcha back... you're stuck now! LOL

Mysteria

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34 posted 2001-10-16 02:13 AM

Suthern ~ ahhhh...well, if truth be told, I too lived this one, and set someone free I loved very much for his own good at the time, and yes, you want them in love, even if it is not with you, but it aches forever. Thanks for commenting (and sorry this rather sad poem got to be a 3-ring circus didn't it)

~I always have time to listen to someone talking from their heart~

BloomingRose
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35 posted 2001-10-16 09:09 AM

Good poem. Sad, but you speak from the heart with these lovely words.

Deb

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36 posted 2001-10-17 06:28 AM

Not only do I love your poems. They flow just right always. I love the interaction in this forum. I'm touched and tickled at the same time. Beautiful.

Sincerely,
Regina

Mysteria

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37 posted 2001-10-17 01:34 PM

Blooming Rose - I thank you for reading this, and have to read yours now that I know who you are

rwood - What a nice thing to say coming from the Queen of abstract poetry - I read all of yours, and now those are poetry sweet lady.

~I always have time to listen to someone talking from their heart~

SmartChick
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38 posted 2001-10-17 10:20 PM

This is a lovely poem. Very sad, though. Seems like our love just isn't enough, sometimes.

Alan
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39 posted 2001-10-17 10:40 PM

Mysteria....this is down right beautiful. I truly enjoyed it. But if you are not careful I will steal the first picture. If you wish me anything make it peace..

Mysteria

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40 posted 2001-10-18 12:55 PM

SmartChick ~ Thank you for your very kind comments.

Alan ~ Help yourself - right click and save to your computer - I don't mind at all if people "borrow" the graphics I find at all. And thanks for your nice words as well.

vlraynes
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41 posted 2001-10-23 01:06 AM

Mysteria-
   Enjoyed these well-penned thoughts.
   And leave it to Marge to beat me to it
   with the details of the song...
   It's always been a favorite of mine too.
   Hugs,
   ~Vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

Mysteria

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42 posted 2001-10-23 01:40 PM

Vicky - where you been girl? Thanks for reading this one, we had a lot of fun with it, and our buddy Baladeer turned my sad song, into a boop boop de doop!

Try giving your smile to someone who doesn't have one, and I bet someone will come along and give you another.
~* Mysteria *~

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