Open Poetry #16 |
Love Is |
Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Love Is Love is such a fickle thing It can be soft as a feather Or have a bee-like sting. It can soar you to heights Hang your heart on a star Drop you down to your knees, Mock your tears from afar. Love is also a fragile thing It needs special care - Your constant understanding. Your sleep might be disrupted Your appetite seem strange Often fever is detected Emotions fight with change. But if you can be patient Allow life's dice to roll, Love can be a blessed thing For love can touch your soul. [This message has been edited by Nightshade (edited 10-14-2001).] |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
You have just described my mystery malady! Aptly portrayed...I enjoyed this. |
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Alan Senior Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 1499right next door |
beautifully done nightshade...you have written of the good side of love well..may you always see just this side alan |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
You've captured this nicely Nightshade ... indeed love can touch one's soul, very much enjoyed your thoughts in this. Best wishes, /Kit |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Thankyou Serenity, Alan & Kit, your comments are always appreciated. Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
Hi Nightshade..You words speak the truth about Love...very nicely done! Hey-we use the same red butterfly icon! how cute! |
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sunshinemist Senior Member
since 2001-09-29
Posts 595Fl. sunshines early mist |
Nightshade, How true your words of wisdom. Lovely write. Thank you for sharing. ~hugs~ smiles ~Marie~ |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* your words tell the perfect beauty that is love. You have done so incredibly well. I pray you will always be able to view love in this magical way. The magic of love is what it makes it so worth seeking out. BRAVO!!! Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
RosePetal,sunshinemist & Startime, thankyou all for your kinds words. Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Ah, what a gem this is Chris!! And a very pretty picture as well....lovely! Love ya, 'Teed.' ~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~ |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
OH yes....love is so many of the things that you have mentioned....It can drive us insane at times....and it makes the world what it is today...Love is so powerful...You have described Love well. |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
NancyLee, Thankyou for the compliments, as always, you make me feel better. hugs, Chris Magnus, Yes, Love is a powerful emotion. Thankyou so much for your response. Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
This is so true. Enjoyed reading it. Thank you for posting it. |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
SmartChick.....and thankyou for enjoying it. Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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