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Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

0 posted 2001-10-12 12:59 PM

In the silence,
where no words are heard,
I can hear
your heart
as it speaks.
It speaks
of a love
that is carried
within your heart
wherever you may be.
It whispers softly
of your dreams, your hopes~
it whispers of us.......

In the silence
I can feel
your heart beat~
reaching out,
touching
with love...
Your essence
surrounds me
with a blanket
of tranquility.

In the silence
your spirit
intertwines
with mine,
embracing us
in a magical moment
as we listen to
the rhapsody~
of love.

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

(I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth)

[This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (edited 10-12-2001).]

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2001-10-12 01:03 PM

Donna~ this is beautiful!!!

SmittenKitten
Senior Member

since 2001-06-20

Posts 1131
where the sky and horizon meet

2 posted 2001-10-12 01:11 PM

"Your essence
surrounds me
with a blanket
of tranquility."

What a beautiful thought....
I really enjoyed this

Hugs,
~Krista

Your beautiful words & creativity allow me to connect with the same in myself.
Thank you for having the courage to share yourself so that I can too

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

3 posted 2001-10-12 03:04 PM

In the silence
your spirit
intertwines
with mine,
embracing us
in a magical moment
as we listen to
the rhapsody~
of love
------------------------------
Oh Donna! Now you know with me being a hopeless romantic I just have to love this one! ~Hugs, NancyLee~

~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~

Suetang
Member Ascendant

since 2001-03-07

Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia

4 posted 2001-10-12 06:39 PM

Gentle Spirit
You captured the very essence of romance in this beautiful piece of writing.
Take care......Sue

Suetang

sunshinemist
Senior Member

since 2001-09-29

Posts 595
Fl. sunshines early mist

5 posted 2001-10-12 06:44 PM

Very nicely done! Enjoyed the softness of this write.

~hugs~

smiles ~Marie~

Keep the Faith

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

6 posted 2001-10-12 07:07 PM

very very nice, Donna...*s

~Wynter

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

7 posted 2001-10-12 08:32 PM

In the silence
I can feel
your heart beat~
reaching out,
touching
with love...
Your essence
surrounds me
with a blanket
of tranquility.

you have spoken my heart and feelings with this....always lovely...thank you

Lauren~

I keep my ideals,
because in spite of everything,
I still believe that
people are really good at heart.
Anne Frank
09*12*01

Honeybee
Member Ascendant

since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

8 posted 2001-10-12 09:23 PM

This is so gentle and pretty

This is my kind of poem!

Take care,
Melissa~

"Poetry is not an opinion expressed...
it is a song that rises from a bleeding
wound...or a smiling mouth"

~Kahlil Gibran~

sigheyes
Member

since 2001-04-25

Posts 323
the winds of destiny

9 posted 2001-10-15 01:45 PM

A exquisite expression of love!

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