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walker
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since 2001-02-11
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0 posted 2001-10-14 06:28 PM



All this time
I given you
consistently
another chance
Why not?
Everyone deserves
second chances
All I want is
for you to love me
You can always
come back
I'll be here
waiting
isn't that what
love's about?



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Mistletoe Angel
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1 posted 2001-10-14 06:33 PM




(big hugggsssssss) Oh Eunice, this poem is so sad and my heart goes out to you too that your love will come back and forgive, for that is what love is about, the tears we cry and the laughs we share are what keeps lovers together! (sigh) You have a beautiful heart flooding with love and you deserve the greatest love to eternally hold! This I wish for you always, sweet walker! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Eunice, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

sunshinemist
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since 2001-09-29
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2 posted 2001-10-14 06:38 PM


Walker, lovely write! Everybody deserves another chance.  
         ~hugs~

smiles ~Marie~

Keep the Faith

The Lady of Shallot
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since 2001-10-03
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3 posted 2001-10-14 08:12 PM


yes, it sure is !!

-befriend yourself and you will never be alone-

Startime
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Canada
4 posted 2001-10-14 09:06 PM


The whole thing about love is second chances and as many more as are needed. Love is not perfect but it is patient. I love the way you put this. Wonderful writing.

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

SmartChick
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5 posted 2001-10-15 08:57 AM


Very sad, but lovely poem. And, yes that is what love is all about.
Duncan
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6 posted 2001-10-15 01:20 PM


Second chances, waiting...love is many things.  You write them all so well.
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Member Patricius
since 2001-08-31
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just out of reach
7 posted 2001-10-15 02:02 PM


walker, yes everyone deserves a second chance, sometimes thirds or fourths!! good work. Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

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