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Mirror Phantoms |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Mirror Phantoms Demon, demon ten feet tall Staring out my mirrored wall. Blazing fire out your eyes Why is this a mute surprise? What is brewing in your stare? What is doing what and where? The day has gone to very thin Or is it night you wish to win? Speak to me of your desire Pour me out your smoke and fire. Spew me out your raging goal Set the brew before my soul. I will tell you if I drink Even if it brings a wink You’re the one that summoned me So state your case or let me be. Demon, demon ten feet tall I wish you gone my mirrored wall. |
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RSWells Member Elite
since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533 |
Sounds like the reflection I get with a hangover, bedhead and prior to a shave. Hopefully fire eyes will shrink in the course of a kinder day. |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Dear Sy - When I picture you peering at your mirror, I see only kindness ten feet tall...  |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
You and Randy been doing the chips and beer thing before bed again havent ya???? When are you boys gonna learn *L* Me thinks you need a new mirror Sy-babes  *winkiewinkie* me Well tomorrow holds only mystery |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
RSWells, Perhaps, thank you for the read. Nan, For that I give you ten big kisses. *L* JM, Are you selling new lamps for old? Winkiewinkie, Stinky |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Oh, how I loved the rhythm and flow in this Sy ... scary visions my friend ... but what a wonderful write!  Best wishes, /Kit |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Y'know, just every once in a while I want to say, "Hey, Merlin..."... very good, Sy! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Kit, A wonderful comment, thank you. *L* Sunshine, Merlin sais, *L* |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Seymour~ You’re the one that summoned me So state your case or let me be. Demon, demon ten feet tall I wish you gone my mirrored wall. Sounds to me as if you've got the power, my friend~ Casting demons there's no doubt a better man looks IN ... not out~ Love ya' *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marge, Trade you ten kisses for those ten hugs. *L* |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Sy, I can't imagine anything 10 feet tall in your mirror...unless you've got Isabel on your shoulders!!!  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Balladeer, How did you ever guess? |
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