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Rain '1825' |
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Greeneyes  
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind 
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In your eyes, stars reveal their reflection of heaven Waves upon the ocean dance in rapture of your voice Your words like rain among my soul fall, caressing my humble heart I have felt the white horses spirit run freely, watching their gallop of changing times creating my loneliness again for you somewhere among the dawn, somewhere among the wind, I feel your essence, my need slowly, gently, crying from eyes of calming green, your name describes my poetic lips still my soul touches the rain I remember ~1825 and still counting~ If you lose your way think back on yesterday, remember me this way...believe [This message has been edited by Greeneyes (edited 10-13-2001).] |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Lauren, This is just so beautiful! It reads so gently and tugs at the heart. Lovely indeed. ~NancyLee~ ~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~ |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Your muse came home....good! And so is this! |
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sigheyes Member
since 2001-04-25
Posts 323the winds of destiny |
It is a wonderful read Greeneyes! Beautiful. *smile* |
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SmittenKitten Senior Member
since 2001-06-20
Posts 1131where the sky and horizon meet |
Greeneyes~ *sigh* this is beautiful...floats gently off the page and settles quietly on my soul. Hugs, ~Krista  Your beautiful words & creativity allow me to connect with the same in myself. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Your words like rain among my soul fall, caressing my humble heart I have felt the white horses spirit run freely, watching their gallop of changing times creating my loneliness again for you somewhere among the dawn, somewhere among the wind, I feel your essence, my need slowly, gently, crying from eyes of calming green, your name describes my poetic lips still my soul touches the rain =============================== Oh my ... oh Lauren ... oh how I needed this today... oh how I wish I had wrote this *S* taking this one for my own... your green eyes always reflect my brown... and my heart's need to reflect his emerald eyes.... and with tears in mine...I thank you for that.  jm   Here I stand like it matters... |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
wow, oh wow....... This is simply super....I love the intensity of the words of love. Such strength and desire. Great poem....Gee, I could go on forever and ever about this one. |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
Lauren, I don't know how much more lovely your writing can get than this. I would like to see this one posted at our workshop. (((hugs))) Michael Michael Auguste~ |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
This is just awesome. I love it. Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
This slid down the page with such ease and beauty Lauren, and I think one of your very best, be proud for it is a beauty. ~I always have time to listen to someone talking from their heart~ |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Very nice Greeneyes.....James |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Greeneyes, this is absolutely wonderful. I will save this one in my library. And Janet Marie, those graphix are fantastic. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
simply beatiful Lauren. . . a work of shimmering hearts and soulful delight. . . excellent. . .  ------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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The Lady of Shallot Senior Member
since 2001-10-03
Posts 818USA |
to remember can mean the difference between light and day to a soul. -befriend yourself and you will never be alone- |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Tis beautiful sweet Lady Lauren. Your words capture what is in your heart and cradle it so tenderly. Wonderful write Dear Friend. *s* On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
forgot to click library box last time  When your own emptiness is all that's getting through |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Enchantress~ I am thankful you have stopped in to read my humble words....your words are more then kind... Sunshine~ Indeed and I am the lucky one....thanks my friend... sigheyes~ thank you for taking your time to read...I appreciate that... SmittenKitten~ as does your response, thank you... Janet Marie~ dear poet friend, if I can reflect your heart then I am the lucky one....and always know I know....my heartfelt tip pen to yours....Magnus~ I am so taken by your words, thank you so much.... Michael~ your friendship touches me so, thank you dear friend for your lovely words, and kind heart.... Nightshade~ awesome is great!! thank you...I appreciate you taking your time to read... Mysteria~ my friend, from one poet to another....indeed lucky to have found this place! JamesMichael~ thank you kind sir.... Midnitesun~ thank you, I appreciate you coming by to read, and hopefully enjoying...and I agree with you, JM does find the best graphics.... Sven~ my friend, you say the most delightful words, to touch anyone....thank you.... The Lady of Shallot~ indeed it can, and my soul has seen both....powerful words, thank you... Gentle Spirit~ thank you dear friend....always.... Peace and love to you all.... Greeneyes~ *** I keep my ideals, because in spite of everything, I still believe that people are really good at heart. Anne Frank 09*12*01 [This message has been edited by Greeneyes (edited 10-11-2001).] |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
I found your words very soothing and therapeutic...a remarkable write! Nathan |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Greeneyes - this is most tender, and a very beautiful expression of your words. BC |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Nate Dogg~ I am humbled by your reply, thank you... Bill C~ Thank you for letting me know you were here, your comment is much appreciated... Greeneyes~ I keep my ideals, because in spite of everything, I still believe that people are really good at heart. Anne Frank 09*12*01 [This message has been edited by Greeneyes (edited 10-13-2001).] |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Am I impressed??? WELL YEAH!!!!!!!!! I am so glad that I ran across this one in the back pages. I always enjoy reading your works but this one really shows your growth and grabs at the heart of the poet. Beautifully written. |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
A beautiful poem it is. Thank you for sharing it. |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Mark~ Wow well hello stranger, and thank you for such a kind compliment!! good to 'see' you Smartchick~ thanks for stopping by to read, its appreciated! ********** & Peace to allGreeneyes~ I keep my ideals, because in spite of everything, I still believe that people are really good at heart. Anne Frank 09*12*01 [This message has been edited by Greeneyes (edited 10-18-2001).] |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
1derful write indeed. I love the finale! Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
Green, a nice write yuh |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
This is absolutely beautiful! The imagery is wonderful. This is a keeper in my library. Deb |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Interloper~ thank you for peeking in, I appreciate your words... wayoutwalt~ thank you as well....a nice complimet.... Greeneyes~ *** I keep my ideals, because in spite of everything, I still believe that people are really good at heart. Anne Frank 09*12*01 [This message has been edited by Greeneyes (edited 10-19-2001).] |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
BloomingRose~ Wow thank you for your comment....I am humbled indeed.... Greeneyes~ *** I keep my ideals, because in spite of everything, I still believe that people are really good at heart. Anne Frank 09*12*01 [This message has been edited by Greeneyes (edited 10-19-2001).] |
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OctoberSky Junior Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 12 |
friend of mine your sky is endless [This message has been edited by OctoberSky (edited 10-19-2001).] |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
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