Open Poetry #16 |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines ![]() |
Inlaid Beyond the darkness there are endless waves of silent dreams, patterned currents to disquiet my nights. Thoughts form shadows, silhouettes, tinting the visions, calling to me, my heart yielding, on lend, to borrowed shapes. Planted within the dark are the verses of you, memories emerging silent, to comfort my heart, crossing time, breaking the night to suspend me in the arms of expression, fating me with your love. ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
The patterned currents Always seem to disturb my sleep, also. Good write Gloom |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
Ahh, Maureen, this one was very nice, and lovely to read...very gentle smile |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
thank you Gloom and Logan, I am glad you enjoyed my words this day. *s ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Wynter~ 'Planted within the dark are the verses of you, memories emerging silent, to comfort my heart' Lady, this is beautiful~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Wynter, I enjoyed this so much. A lovely read. ~Nancy~ ~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~ |
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LoveLetters Junior Member
since 2001-10-09
Posts 35State of Hope |
Beautiful what memories do sometimes. Very nice writing. Love has many masks. I am but one of them. |
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The Lady of Shallot Senior Member
since 2001-10-03
Posts 818USA |
that last line grabbed my heartstrings. Lovely verse. -befriend yourself and you will never be alone- |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
~*Marge*~ thank you dear friend..hugs are very comforting too *s ((hugss)) back Thank you Nancy, it's nice to know someone enjoys what I write. LoveLetters, thank you, memories are all I have... The Lady of Shallot, love does that...grabs at the heartstrings...thank you for being so kind. ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". |
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