Open Poetry #16 |
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The Difference |
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vandana![]()
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
Another brand new day comes along, Listening to our song, Now When I listen to the words, Looking back when we're meant to be, The love was different that time, love was real, now the day has changed into it's time and between love and time when it all that makes it's own difference, Don't you see? the love we shared was different, even now the love we are holding to, It's makes a differnce In us too, The blue skies, where a love lies in its heaven, The songs that we sung, The love that makes everythings It's own difference, The diference changes its every way of it's own time The flowers that bloom And the weather has it's own difference, So we're here to make difference in our life. let's make a difference in changes too, The difference in you and me, The differnce in everything that we make, The hearts that takes our breathe away, The difference....... This is my new poem I just wrote it in only five minutes.Hope you all will like it. [This message has been edited by vandana (edited 10-10-2001).] |
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SEA![]() ![]()
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Vandana, it's wonderful! ![]() ![]() |
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Interloper![]() ![]()
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
1derful! ![]() |
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Midnitesun![]()
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
It proves that love can make a big difference in less than five minutes. And it also proves that all of us are no different in what we search for on earth. Thanks for sharing. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Vandana, I know how hard it is to express yourself in only five minutes, but when it's the right one, then there IS the difference! Thank you for sharing this! |
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Sven![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
a new record my friend. . . just shows that when the feeling comes. . . you have to go with it. . . great job. . . ![]() ------------------------------------------------------ To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Beautiful thoughts, Vandana! |
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