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Greeneyes  
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind 
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We will be one as the sea gathers upon the dry shores leading its tides to ebb the endless destiny I feel when we are together Hold my eyes in yours, tell me you cant see it, brush my trembling lips, tell me you dont feel it, hear me speak your name whispering softly, for this moment, I know love Dance me in golden streams of passion, take my desire place it upon your heart, let our soul be one Your hands on my body, move me into the realms of darkness I long for when you can not be seen among the stars, yet still you are woven in my tapestry of elegant ache As the stars form midnights hue I lay with you, Whispering your gentle name Man of soft ecstasy in this m o m e n t I know love [This message has been edited by Greeneyes (edited 10-08-2001).] |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"Your hands on my body, move me into the realms of darkness I long for when you can not be seen among the stars, yet still you are woven in my tapestry of elegant ache" this is just stunning  |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
We will be one as the sea gathers upon the dry shores leading its tides to ebb the endless destiny I feel when we are together Hold my eyes in yours, tell me you cant see it, brush my trembling lips, tell me you dont feel it, hear me speak your name whispering softly, for this moment, I know love ============================== Dear dear Lauren... when your muse whispers to you from the stars and the tides... there is nothing that you cant write that I dont feel...... this is exquisite and laced with your signature soft gentle grace. Im not here as much these days...but Im so glad I didnt miss this beauty  jm We're all feeding our lonely ... like it might go away, |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
This is just stunningly beautiful!! Romantic and lyrical. Much enjoyed. ~Nancy~ ~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~ |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
I haven't the words to adequately describe how lovely I find this, Lauren. *hug* my friend. Michael Michael Auguste~ |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
*sighs* This is so gorgeous Yes, indeed, that is a perfect moment! Take care, Melissa~ "Poetry is not an opinion expressed... |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
now you know why you will always be one of my favorite poets. . . *sigh*. . . this is truly one of your best. . . from your heart. . . excellent. . . ----------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Chelsea~ Member
since 2001-02-09
Posts 260Ontario, CANADA |
greeneyes, wow! this is beautiful |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
SEA~ Wow, thank you so much....I dont think I have ever received stunning before, it made me smile! Lauren~ I keep my ideals, because in spite of everything, I still believe that people are really good at heart. Anne Frank 09*12*01 [This message has been edited by Greeneyes (edited 10-08-2001).] |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Janet Marie~~ You are so golden, with your words, and kindness....thank you for being you, and understanding, you are so appreciated...  Lauren~ *** I keep my ideals, because in spite of everything, I still believe that people are really good at heart. Anne Frank 09*12*01 [This message has been edited by Greeneyes (edited 10-08-2001).] |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Enchantress~~ Thank you for taking time to read, I humbled by your comment....I appreciate that so much~ Lauren~ *** I keep my ideals, because in spite of everything, I still believe that people are really good at heart. Anne Frank 09*12*01 [This message has been edited by Greeneyes (edited 10-08-2001).] |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Lauren, This was all red roses, satin and lace, and romatically exquisite. I loved this piece. Oh, and by the way.........  ~I always have time to listen to someone talking from their heart~ |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Very nice...I enjoy moments like this...James |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Sharon, thank you so much...and for the birthday wish....that means so much to me.... Lauren [This message has been edited by Greeneyes (edited 10-09-2001).] |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
JamesMichael~ so do I, thank you for stopping in... Lauren [This message has been edited by Greeneyes (edited 10-09-2001).] |
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MatthewG New Member
since 2002-01-08
Posts 2 |
i can't help but read this stunnin' piece and be moved..everytime..you're so talented..and i'm proud to call you my close mate.. |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Lauren, *sighs* Sooooooo pretty!!!!! This is just stunning. I loved it Hugs, Tara "My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read" |
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