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Heart To Heart
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Heart To Heart |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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Heart to Heart ~*Marge Tindal*~  When a sweet 'I love you' falls asleep on my cheek Heart to heart I hear it sigh in cylindrical breaths from the very depths of you Gently encircling my dreams with soft rose-scented refrain You awaken me on first morning sunlight, coffee in hand ... heart in your eyes Smiling, I can't help but exhale, 'Morning babe, 'me too' ... November 10, 2001 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Oh my...such a good way to live life..with love so tenderly given and received!! Hugs! |
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inot2B Member Elite
since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205Arkansas |
Very nicely done. Nothing ends or starts a day better than an "I Love You". |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Three words known over the world in many forms...but with the same meaning...so treasured by us all...Thanx Marge...well done...always so... |
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Greeneyes 
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
all should wake to this, its most lovely Marge.... Greeneyes~ I keep my ideals, |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
How did you know I always awaken like that  (in my dreams that is  )Titia A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess... Feel free to use the pictures on my website. http://communities.msn.com/Titiasplace/ [This message has been edited by Titia Geertman (edited 11-12-2001).] |
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Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Sooooo lovely, Marge! Everyone should be so lucky! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
What a lovely way to start the day! And a lovely poem as well. Thank you for this one! ~hugs, Nancy~ ~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~ |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Sounds heavenly, Marge - Sweet dreams, m'friend...  |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
*smiling at you* Well...thank you for doing as I asked  I told ya to come back well inspired *teehee* and you ARE!!! coffee and sighs...breakfast in bed beautiful Margie-girl  meYou're the hidden cost and the thing that's lost in everything I do. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Martie~ Oh, sweet sis ... it's a VERY BIG LIKE INot2B~ I'd sure have to agree with you on that one~ Magnus~ Thank you sooooooo much~ GreenEyes~ I'd vote for it~  Thank you~ Titia~ If it's a dream ... god, don't wake me ! And ... this dream grows roses too~ Denise~ Thank you, my dear friend~ Enchantress~ Thanks for letting me know you enjoyed my little meandering thoughts~ Nan~ 'heavenly' ... pretty neat metaphor for sure~  JanetMarie~ You did ... and I sure did~ *smiling gently and A LOT* *Hugs* to you all~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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cottage Member
since 2001-06-21
Posts 138 |
oh Marge, your words are ever so beautiful... cottage |
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Kevin
since 1999-11-02
Posts 729Torrington, Ct, Usa |
Hey there stranger I always liked to think of you as my adoptive mom in my passions family Your a beautiful person marge...I read everything I can of yours just so you know and youll be one of the things im thankfull for this time around |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Cottage~ Ohhhh, I thank you so much~ Kevin~ Awwwww, what a sweet compliment~ Thank you, sweetie~ I care about you and your happiness~ *squeezy hugs*  ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
"You awaken me on first morning sunlight, coffee in hand ... heart in your eyes" Oh Marge .... could there be any more beautiful awakening than this? Thank you for the lovely morning read ... smiling here. Best wishes, /Kit |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
in cylindrical breaths from the very depths of you ..... WOW... Marge ...WOW regards, my friend, Sudhir |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Kit~ Thanks for letting me know I shared your morning smile~ Sudhir~ *smiling gently* from me to you~ Thank you, my friend~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) Oh Marge, you are soooooooo romantic, this poem too made me sigh! (smiles) I dream ever so much of waking up and looking into the eyes of my dream love and how good it feels to say "Good morning, love" to her! (smiles) Sooooooo lovely! (kiss on cheek) Have a beautiful day, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Marge, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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A Whisper's Caress Senior Member
since 2000-11-03
Posts 791on the horizon of a fairytale |
well marge, you did it again. thunderous applause for this exceptional piece. |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Ah, nothing lovelier, you are a fortunate lady! Corinne |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
Ahhhh... i just heaved a well-contented sigh... we should all read poems like this every day... thank you for your work |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
And here I sit, exhaling cylindrical sighs after reading this one, Marge. A great write straight from a great big warm heart. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Noah~ Romantic ... who, Moi` ? Yeppers .. guilty as charged~ Thank you~ AWhispersCaress~ Thank you so very much for the sweet reply~ Corinne~ Thank you ... yes, I think I'm kinda of fortunate too~ Kaile~ Ahhhhh, the 'work' was in the coffee~ The rest was sheer pleasure~ MidniteSun~ Thank you ... it's a real pleasure to share with you~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Soaringeagle Member
since 2000-12-06
Posts 156CANADA |
NOTHING DOES IT LIKE "I LOVE YOU" BEAUTIFULLY WRITTEN HUGS AGAIN |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Passing those smiles around, I see.... |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Marge, wouldn't it be great if everyone could experience this every day. Wonderful!!! Thanks for the smiles. On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Marge, Love how so few words speak volumns when you write! "me too" says it all. This reminds me of the song that says..."just one look, and I knew". Hugs, Deb |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* oh how wonderful that would be. You gave me a vision that set my heart yearning. Wonderful. I love it. Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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MyEnchanted_Melody Senior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be. |
WOw.....this is so tenderly lovely. I simpley loved it and I'd have to qoute all of it to tell you which part I liked it best. Thank you dearest ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SoaringEagle~ Thank you my sweet forever friend~ Such easy words to tumble from the heart~ Karilea~ I'm trying~  I just gets easier with practice~ GentleSpirit~ LOL ... Happening for me~ I'd wish it for all~ Thank you~ BloomingRose~ Thank you, sweet lady~ I just love the chance to say 'me too'~ Special~ StarTime~ It IS just wonderful~ Thank you for sharing your yearning~ MyEnchantedMelody~ I thank you soooooooo very much for your sweet reply~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
coffee in hand ... heart in your eyes What an incredible way to waken... are there any more of these alarm clocks out there? *G* I love this tender beauty, Marge... Sorry I missed it first time around. *S* |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SweetSuthernGal~ I think there are a few more ... and no 'snooze alarms'~ You're a doll ! *Hugs* ~*Me*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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