unfulfilled...a double acrostic

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Open Poetry #16

unfulfilled...a double acrostic

Alan
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since 2000-09-12

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right next door

0 posted 2001-09-20 11:07 PM

Unfulfilled

Living is worthwhile with you to Love
Only comes once in a lifetime, you are my Once
Voluptuous love turning my life Vivid
Infesting my life with love feeling Inciting
Nice and sweet of day but total woman at Night
God’s gift to me, YOU are my Goddess
Yearning for your touch yielding completely to You
Over empty hearts, you forged a bridge, meant for you Only
Until I started loving you my life was Unfulfilled

© alan aka icyheart
9/20/01

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

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Canada eh.

1 posted 2001-09-20 11:10 PM

Beautiful Alan...just beautiful!!

~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before~

Alan
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since 2000-09-12

Posts 1499
right next door

2 posted 2001-09-20 11:20 PM

Thank you Nancy...glad you liked it
alan

Topheth
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since 2001-09-08

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Texas

3 posted 2001-09-20 11:35 PM

Very very nice.... mind if I give it a try?

Balladeer

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since 1999-06-05

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Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA

4 posted 2001-09-20 11:39 PM

You demonstrate an excellent ability here, Alan. Nicely done...

Alan
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since 2000-09-12

Posts 1499
right next door

5 posted 2001-09-20 11:43 PM

Topheth...feel free..I welcome it...just becare to look at both ends of each line.
alan

[This message has been edited by Alan (edited 09-20-2001).]

Alan
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since 2000-09-12

Posts 1499
right next door

6 posted 2001-09-20 11:45 PM

Balladeer...thank you sir...that means a lot to me coming from you.
alan

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