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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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And Yet ... ~*Marge Tindal*~  You did not see the tears fall You did not know I cried For all the tears I've shed were hidden deep inside A heart in sorrow often wears a smile for others to see And yet ... when mine broke you came on in and shared so tenderly All I thought I had kept hidden could be seen by a friend so true Thank you, special person for everything you do~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
This special person is lucky to have you Marge. Beautiful write, tender and sincere. Hugs. Donna On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
this should go directly to Hallmark  Marge, you are magic |
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The Rusty Knight Member
since 2001-08-29
Posts 414Texas |
I always thought Fla was the sunshine state because of the weather....but it is because of all of your poems coming out of there. great piece Death comes not when we cease to breathe, but when we cease to dream. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
I agree, Marge...this would make a beautiful card! Hugs dear friend! |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
very nice...Ms Angel of Passion *s ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice write |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Very Special...Very Beautiful...the poem and YOU Marge! ~Time has cast a spell on you |
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TeChNo KiTtY Junior Member
since 2001-09-20
Posts 22Wisconsin, USA |
aww...that's really sweet |
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kitkat Senior Member
since 2000-01-11
Posts 878Nova Scotia |
As always your poetry touches my heart. *I agree this is a Hallmark card -------------- |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
Marge, someone is very lucky to have a friend like you. Beautiful. Dee I wish you every happiness and may you always have the best of the good things in life. a brand |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
GentleSpirit~ Ah ... I'm the lucky one~ SEA~ Awwwww, thank you honey~ Dan~ Another awwwwww, thank you~ Martie~ My friend ... you are priceless~ Wynter~ *smile* ... thank you~  VanDana~ *Hugs* Enchantress~ I thank you oodles ! TeChNo KiTtY~ Thanks bunches~ KitKat~ Awww, thank you very much. Dee~ Shucks, that what she says~ Thank you~ *But ... if it was Hallmark you'd have to PAY for it ... Everybody say, THANK YOU, RON !  *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
ahhh Marge, I am so glad that you had a very special friend to lean on, as sometimes we lean on you, me included, and forget that perhaps you need someone too. Hugs sweet friend, may your heart heal in time. Beautiful "card", simply beautiful. ~* If you want a rainbow, sometimes you just have to put up with a little rain *~ |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
As always, just beautiful  TitiaA rose is a rose is a rose...I guess... |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Marge- A true friend knows your heart.  To be allowed into YOUR heart is the greatest gift that anyone could ask for. This is truly beautiful, sweet friend...as are YOU. I love you! HUGS, ~Me "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Mysteria~ I feel so blessed with a wonderful network of friends. Thank you so much. Titia~ Big hugs for you hon. Thank you~ Vicky~ What can I say ? What was that song we were singing the other night ??? LOL ! You're a doll ... and if I didn't know better, I'd swear I see you in my mirror ~ Love ya' *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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