Open Poetry #16 |
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In My Dreams..................... |
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SEA![]() ![]()
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you ![]() |
missing you remembering the gentleness of your touch the quiet storm that is your voice feeling helpless tonight given no choice but this remembering knowing in my heart of secret heart's I'll never look at him the way I will always look at you when I dream........... ~SEA~ |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
I'll never look at him the way I will always look at you when I dream........... Oh Sea...this is so beautiful...sad, but beautiful. ~Time has cast a spell on you |
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Alan Senior Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 1499right next door |
SEA...this is beautiful. Sometimes a dream is better than reality. alan |
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Topheth Member
since 2001-09-08
Posts 297Texas |
Very nice, SEA, very nice. |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SEA~ You write the dreams well, girlie~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
This is absolutely beautiful! ![]() "Let me pierce the realm of glamour |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice...James |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Oh darn girl....you have penned some feelings I am having oh so well today. Beautiful write. On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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SEA![]() ![]()
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Enchantress~ thank you! ![]() Alan~ sometimes.... ![]() ![]() Topheth~ thanks ![]() Marge~ I just wish I could do it like you do! ![]() ![]() EagleOne~ ![]() James~ ![]() Gentle Spirit~ I'm happy you liked this ![]() ~SEA "It's true/the way I feel |
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vandana![]()
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
liked it a lot ![]() |
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Interloper![]() ![]()
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Hmmmmmmmm, looove your dreams ![]() |
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The Rusty Knight Member
since 2001-08-29
Posts 414Texas |
knowing in my heart of secret heart's I'll never look at him the way I will always look at you when I dream........... Talk about steal a fellas heart....this does it....I am glad I put my mirror down from practicing my "thoughtful pout" to see this one. Death comes not when we cease to breathe, but when we cease to dream. |
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SEA![]() ![]()
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Vandana~ thanks! ![]() Interloper~ you spoil me ![]() ![]() TRK~ lol, thank you for that incredible warm fuzzy ![]() ![]() ~SEA |
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Apachecat906 Member
since 2001-09-04
Posts 217Michigan, USA |
Darn it can you stop writing all these lovey dovey poems!?!?!? Now I have to send my ex this one and he's really gonna be mad. ![]() Thanks for the good poem. ![]() |
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SEA![]() ![]()
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
LOL ![]() ![]() ![]() |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
SEA- Ah yes...dreams...gotta love 'em.. ![]() Nicely penned, my friend. Hugs, ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Aw, SEA! I feel the same way about you... ![]() |
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