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Silence Screaming |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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Even there--is lack of me. Truly now I drink of Lethe-- and still cannot forget the death of smiles and conversation shared... I wake each day--he's still not there. oh dear God, I miss my friend. How dare the birds commence to sing? Tell me why the sun still shines and stars at night adorn the sky? cease this noise of silence screaming. |
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angelswing Senior Member
since 2000-02-10
Posts 705United Kingdom |
wow, nice poem, I liked the closing lines especially, as they came to the point perfectly . Thankyou very much, I enjoyed it . L.of.L. Tommy . XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXX 'There is only a very thin line between genius and insanity, this is measured only on sucess; I am proud to be considered an under-achieving genius'. |
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JLR Senior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785 |
I remember the day after a friend of mine died, walking outside to see the world still going on, not even a bump in the rhythym of the day...and I was honestly surprised. This write from you comes on what would have been her birthday. And I thank you for writing what I've never quite been able to get into words. |
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Mysteria 
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Time will sing a song Celebration of his life Then memories live Scream silently, for this is the shroud of mourning, and it has no sound to anyone but you. In time it will turn it into a song that celebrates his life and you are able to hold dear all the memories that made a wonderful relationship what it was, for he will always be alive in you, and your children! Serenity I send my love and hope you will continue to write out the pain. (hugs) ~ Give the heavens above more than just a passing glance ~And when you get the choice to sit it out or dance ~ I hope you dance. (Lee Ann Womack) |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
and still cannot forget the death of smiles and conversation shared Dear gentle Serenity,,very gentle smile, there was no death, because they are still with you, and will always be with you. And if you think..what would he have said?..I truely believe you will have the answer as if he told you, as I feel he will in your mind...hang in there through these tough times, and remember we are there for you |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
"Don't they know it's the end of the world....?" Silent screaming can be the loudest kind....this poem, for example.....very powerful, Karen. |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
When you scream we'll hear you When you fall we'll catch you When you're down we'll lift you When you're alone we'll comfort you When you write we'll read you we can not fill your emptyness But if we could we sure would A big warm HUG to you dear friend. Titia A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess... |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
A powerful write me Sista, and just the way to help wring out the pain. Loved these.... "How dare the birds commence to sing?" and "Tell me that I'm only dreaming-- cease this noise of silence screaming." Hugs and Love Sweet Serenity  Maree |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
Sad and true. I have been down this path. Hugs to you. There is society where none intrudes, by the deep sea, and music in its roar. |
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SmittenKitten Senior Member
since 2001-06-20
Posts 1131where the sky and horizon meet |
Your silent scream is oh so powerful. As always, your way of expressing yourself is astounding. Beautiful poem Serenity. Hugs, ~Krista |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
serenity- I love this part... "Blackened sun, malingering. How dare the birds commence to sing? Tell me why the sun still shines and stars at night adorn the sky? Tell me that I'm only dreaming-- cease this noise of silence screaming." Extremely powerful write. I hear your silent screams, my friend. Love and hugs to you, ~vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes [This message has been edited by vlraynes (edited 07-27-2001).] |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
serenity, very powerful write .... I have often felt like this in the past. Hugs from me to you. Parker |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Serenity--You write the pain with such intensity I can almost feel it myself. Hugs!! |
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