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Shadow Dance |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
 The dark begins to fall Creating shadows on my wall Softly they start to dance In the ebb of sweet romance Our lips silently meet As hearts skip a beat Your body next to mine All resistance resigns I am now completely yours You broke down the doors Destroying the locks On my heart’s box Emotions are suddenly freed As passion intercedes Releasing the rusty chains That served to restrain Love shall now prevail The wind hits my sails With a strong gust Showing me we must Lying there with you The intensity grew Encompassing the night Easing my inner fright Our hands explore Demolishing the door That once had sealed Allowing me to be healed The time has come For me to succumb To your masculine charms Without any alarm art: Passion by: Jaoni All writing comes |
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Voiceless Senior Member
since 2001-02-19
Posts 686Under the stars upon the wind |
everyone seems to be in the love mood tonight, but everyone needs to love and be loved at some point! Great poem! Freedom is not Free (Korean War memorial) |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
Ahh, LW, very gentle smile, very lovely write of passions voiced. To love is to live, and to live you need to love. So open your heart and follow the lead.. |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"I am now completely yours You broke down the doors Destroying the locks On my heart’s box" Love that part.....sooooo beautiful  I enjoyed this very much "Four be the things I'd been better without: Love, curiosity, freckles and doubt." |
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PoetryLuvR Junior Member
since 2001-07-27
Posts 16Ca, USA |
I loved this poem...very passionate and i love the imagery. |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Wow! ~ Give the heavens above more than just a passing glance ~And when you get the choice to sit it out or dance ~ I hope you dance. (Lee Ann Womack) |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Wolfie, my goodness this is sooooooooooooo gorgeous... I truly enjoyed this poem thanx sweetie for a great read *~coco~* |
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