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Wind Song |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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Wind Song ~*Marge Tindal*~  How the wind colors the song flung across the crescendo of night Holding on to notes of remember blowing in the breeze, feather-light Caressing the cheek of a lover leaning into the wind of play Swirling seductively across a shoulder waiting so far away Throw your song upon the wind to drift where it may go Someone is waiting to hear you wherever the four winds blow And should you listen closely you'll smile in recognize As another sends a song back to you on gently floating sighs ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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RSWells Member Elite
since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533 |
Enough to make me want to stay outside all day. Enjoyed. |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
There are times I wonder if you can surpass yourself.... this is one of those moments when I know you have.... IWIHWT.... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marge, Love it. Someone is waiting to hear you wherever the four winds blow and a mighty sweet song it is. *L* |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
very nice Marge... as usual... love the last lines.. they tie it up so well.. |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
Your feeling of the wind is wonderful and full of charm, a lover which caresses, sharing with the many, partying with the voices that wander with its breeze. Nice read. I love the wind. Rick |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
always Marge....  always you say it so perfectly |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
How the wind colors the song flung across the crescendo of night Holding on to notes of remember blowing in the breeze, feather-light Caressing the cheek of a lover leaning into the wind of play Swirling seductively across a shoulder waiting so far away =============================== I must ditto Ladys envy... I too WIHWT...  enchanting and poetically perfect... the imagery and cadence are delightful and the romantic intend is the reason for poetry Beautiful Margie **by the way..how do ya like my sig *wink*  Feels like Im dancing with truth and wisdom |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Marge, this is perfect, whimsical and so lovely, I love it  Melissa~ |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
I love the song of the wind... and you sing it beautifully....  |
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g-hm Member
since 2001-05-16
Posts 85 |
so soothing Marge, enjoyed it very much. Gail |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
This was different and went right to my "ahhhh bone"! Ahh, I loved this one, it was one of the nicest I have read of yours Marge, and yes, soothing somehow. Tah. If you have a choice to sit down or dance, dance! |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Yes I sent a song on the wind last night...oh thank you for this sweet lady |
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SmittenKitten Senior Member
since 2001-06-20
Posts 1131where the sky and horizon meet |
Oh how lovely Marge...you've touched my heart with this one. It's beautiful! ~Krista "Poetry and Hums aren't things which you get, they're things which get you. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
RSWells~ May gentle breezes call your name in song~ LadyInWhite~ Awwww ! That's such a nice thing for you to say. Thank you soooooo much ! Seymour~ Thank you, darlin' ! CPatHair~ Thanks .. I appreciate that. Rick~ And I also admire the wind~ I sit on my porch in the early eavening and play harmonica and the wind carries my song to neighbors miles away. They often let me know how they've enjoyed it. SEA~ Awww ! Ya' make me smile with your sweetness~ JanetMarie~ Awwww ! You too ! And YES ... I love the 'sig-y' Melissa~ Somehow, I knew you would.  Thanks, my friend. Nan~ Thank you, hon ! Gail~ I appreciate you being here ! Mysteria~ Just plucking some heartstrings and this one sang out. Thank you, poet. Paula~ Oh, you are soooooooo welcome, my little friend. SmittenKitten~ I like touching hearts ... glad yours was one of them ! *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Temptress
Moderator
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
I know this wind, and I love this poem. Yours always uplift my heart in some way. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
TemptyOne~ Just knowing the wind carried this one your way is delightful to me. Thank you~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Marge- This is so lovely and so softly written... it just whispers.. ...a breeze of perfection..  hugs, ~vicky "...until you have read the verse on his |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
Ahh, that wonderous breeze that we know and love..very gentle smile, Marge |
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Flutterwings Member
since 2001-07-10
Posts 288Maine |
Hi! Marge, I'm quite new here... but, I know a good read when I read it. The rhythm and rhyme carried me on the breeze of this soothing melody. One exquisite piece. Bravo! Love and peace ((~.~)) |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Vicky~ I appreciate knowing you enjoyed it. Sometimes the softest whispers do come on the wind~ Logan~ We do seem to enjoy the same gentle breezes blowing across the night~  FlutterWings~ Welcome to Passions ! I thank you for your encouraging compliments. You're gonna like it here in our circle of friendship. *Hugs* to all ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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