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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
Rain comes like a thunder, Strike a stroke a lightning, Blink an eye of a lightning [This message has been edited by vandana (edited 07-25-2001).] |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
great idea! You do need another "n" in lightning, though. I'm assuming, given the subject, you don't mean 'lighting'. |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Yes... this captures in minimalistic form the way a storm is percieved... Rain is so different in different parts of the world... the intensity and the way way storms move or drop rain can vary...so I enjoyed this as it adds to the perception of what kind of storm... Now on the metaphorical side...it is also a very nice analogy for struggles or fighting..and or the emotional side of such... I Enjoyed |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Interesting write. Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. Philip Sidney (1554-1586) Loving in Truth |
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