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Lonely Shadow
Member

since 2000-03-14

Posts 128
Virginia

0 posted 2001-07-11 10:58 PM

My girlfriend asked for my help in an assignment for her class... I tried to help and thinking of how much I missed her, this is what came about...

The morning slowly brings the light
Chasing away the darkness
Laying the moon to rest
As the sun begins to rise
Waking from my gentle slumber
Joyous of the day before me
Loving this wonderful feeling
of having you next to me
Hating to leave this
beautiful moment behind

Remembering the moments of old
Each feeling seeming brand new
For the longest time
I have felt only pain and sorrow
But now, happiness and joy
Engulf my entire being
Holding you in my arms
Not wanting to let you go
Looking into your beautiful eyes
I tell you how much I love you
And how much you mean to me

I remember almost drowning
In the sea of turmoil
Then suddenly feeling you
Slowly pull me to shore
Saving me from certain death
Breathing new life into my being
My heart was once cold as ice
then you slowly ignited the fire within me

My heart belongs to you my love
You have given me the courage
To face my fear, my inner demons
I know you will always be by my side
No matter how bad things may be
When loneliness seems to take its toll
When my friends all gone
I know deep in my heart
That I will always have you
My love, my best friend

Fear destroys the mind, depression destroys the soul... only love and compassion may save you from death.

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2001-07-11 11:02 PM

right to my heart, wow, love this

and it goes to my library!

cpalmer
Senior Member

since 2001-06-26

Posts 977
Phoenix, Az

2 posted 2001-07-11 11:02 PM

This is such a beautiful write...I love it
Cindi

God is our inspiration; Words of the heart can be music to our ears
Cpalmer

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

3 posted 2001-07-12 12:58 PM

LonelyShadow~

'I remember almost drowning
In the sea of turmoil
Then suddenly feeling you
Slowly pull me to shore
Saving me from certain death
Breathing new life into my being
My heart was once cold as ice
then you slowly ignited the fire within me'

You've written of the power of touch another can have on us ...
and we can have on another.

Very convincingly written.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

4 posted 2001-07-12 01:11 AM

I think you'll be able to change your pen name

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

5 posted 2001-07-12 08:37 AM

very nicely done!! Wonderful expression... I enjoyed a great deal!!

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