Open Poetry #15 |
Shadow's Sleep--inspired by RS Wells |
VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Shadow’s Sleep Virginia Salter it was a day of shadow’s sleep when the clouds ‘fore sun did creep blacking out the light of day keeping back delight’s convey and bringing all to weep for contrast of the joy of bright was mourned profound in pain of fright for morose did the hour seem be and could not bring the glad to me for its hold was much too tight I walked and walked to escape the clouds through the ever maddening crowds whose shouts were driving me near mad we could not see the good, for bad so covered here in darkened shrouds our legs grew weaker with each hour our thoughts and tastes grew ever sour until we buckled under pressure’s weight upon our knees, in halted gait in fervent prayer we sought His Power as quickly as the day’d begun the clouds were rent, revealing sun warmed and befriended in full glee we peeked and saw, so reverently our shadows, too, with prayers spun to our feet all friend and foe bidding adieu to heavy woe joining hands and hearts in mirth the dark and light’s new given birth full merriment did flow © July 11, 2001 [This message has been edited by VAS (edited 07-12-2001).] |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
nicely devotional VAS.. some very nice lines in here... |
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Lighthousebob Member Elite
since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725California |
This is a beautiful testimony of the power of united fervent prayer....... turning the clouds of sorrow into sunlight of joy. Wonderful and miraculous. |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
thank you both...you are so wonderfully encouraging...and coming back in to read, I've corrected a small typo as well...sanctuary much! |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
RS will be happy when he reads this, I think. |
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RSWells Member Elite
since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533 |
This was beautiful. I'm glad my simple comment drew such inspiration. Thank you. |
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Waseem Cheema Member
since 2001-03-16
Posts 369Pakistan |
Its really very beautiful |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
This was a beautifully constructed poem, and it was such an easy flowing read, well done Virginia. If you have a choice to sit down or dance, dance! |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Oh Vas, this is great oh my goodness what a splendid write can ya tell I very much enjoyed the read Hugs2Usweetie *~coco~* |
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