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Waseem Cheema
Member

since 2001-03-16

Posts 369
Pakistan

0 posted 2001-07-11 03:29 PM

11/07/2001

YEH TUM NA JAN PAO GEY
You will not be known of this

Jub suraj kay dhul janay pey
When after the setting of the sun
Dil kay darwazay pey
At the door step of heart
Shaam dustak dehti hey
Evening knocks
To thundi hawain chulti hain
Then cool breeze blows
Oor tari yadain aati hain
And your recurs come
Dil pey kiya kiya beet jati hey
What does my heart face? (You don't know)
Yah tum na jan pao gey
You will not be known of this
Yah din kasay guzarta hey
How this day has past
Yah ratain kasay guzarti hain
How these nights past
Yah subho kasay hoti hey
How this morning rises
Tum bathey ho kissi unjaney main
You are sitting at an unknown place
Yah tum na jan pao gey
You will not be known of this
Yah chandni kasay hoti hey
How this moonlight spreads
Taray kasay jilmalatey hain
How these stars shine
Yah barsat kasay hoti hey
How this rains in raining season
Dil beyqrar kasay hota hey
How heart become restless
Tum khoey ho kissi afsanay main
You have lost in a dream
Yah tum na jan pao gey
You will not be known of this
Yah phool kasay khiltay hain
How these flowers bloom
Khushboo kasay phail jati hey
How the smell spread
Phool sey puttiyan toot ker
Petals after separating from flower
Kasay bikher jati hain
How they spread
Tum khoey ho kissi veraney main
You have lost at any desolate
Yah tum na jan pao gey
You will not be known of this
Jub koyal ko ko karti hey
When cuckoo speaks ko ko
To dil key Tar bujtey hain
Then the wires of heart swing
Jub chiryan chon chon chonkerti hain
When sparrows speak chon chon
To main tari sochoon main
Then in your thinking
Kasay Dooeb jata hoon
How I drown
Yah tum na jan pao gey
You will not be known of this
Jub in nazuk hontoon pey
When on these soft lips
Tara nam aata hey
Your name comes
Yah sansain kasay rukti hain
How these sighs suffocated
Yah dil kasay dhrukta hey
How this heart beats
Yah tum na jan pao gey
You will not be known of this

~Wasi~

I love to nice poetry.

[This message has been edited by Waseem Cheema (edited 07-12-2001).]

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

1 posted 2001-07-11 03:42 PM

lovely read... I enjoyed as usual the language and images..it is in many ways the differences in how they are presented which is fascinating

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

2 posted 2001-07-11 05:29 PM

Very nice, Waseem, I really like the feel of it.

helen smith
Member

since 2001-03-12

Posts 240

3 posted 2001-07-11 05:32 PM

Waseem I think it is my favourite .zabardast my friend

Titia Geertman
Member Ascendant

since 2001-05-07

Posts 5182
Netherlands

4 posted 2001-07-11 05:48 PM

Yes but now we do know uh? because you just told us in your own beautiful way

Titia

A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess...
Feel free to use the pictures on my website. http://communities.msn.com/Titiasplace&naventryid=100

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

5 posted 2001-07-11 06:48 PM

"you will not be known of this"

there is poetry in your phrasing...thank you for sharing the grace of your language with us. This IS lovely!

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

6 posted 2001-07-11 07:17 PM

What an enthralling read, thank you so much for this!

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

7 posted 2001-07-11 07:19 PM

very romantic Wasi

I really like this

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

8 posted 2001-07-11 08:05 PM

Waseem~

'Jub in nazuk hontoon pey
When on these soft lips
Tara nam aata hey
Your name comes
Yah sansain kasay rukti hain
How these sighs suffocated
Yah dil kasay dhrukta hey
How this heart beats
Yah tum na jan pao gey
You will not be known of this'

This is so lovely in it's sadness.
How lovingly you've shared with us.
Thank you.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Qumar Fatthi
Member

since 2001-05-20

Posts 59
Pakistan

9 posted 2001-07-12 04:38 AM

How can u say
"Yah tum na jan pao gey "
i know all the things.............
my dear.........
Zabardust.............

Waseem Cheema
Member

since 2001-03-16

Posts 369
Pakistan

10 posted 2001-07-12 02:14 PM

Thank you very much
Cpat, VAS, helen, Titia, serenity, Irish, SEA, Marge and Qumar... I am really greatful to all of you for such a love and appriciation. It is all due to you people only...........Thanx a lot........

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