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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA 
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nights of emerald polished and tumbled so rare my jewel of passion ---------------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
with passion you write rarest emerald of all inspirational |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
I'll take a ruby wine staining around his lips crimson teardrops fall Just an ad lib. Love your emerald themes. Sandra [This message has been edited by catalinamoon (edited 07-11-2001).] |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
oh you do green so well, Sven! I'll take amethyst I really can't resyst even should you insyst I really must persyst because you see, kind sir, it really makes me purr for I was born for it, would you concur? I'm a February baby, baby! |
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Lighthousebob Member Elite
since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725California |
This is one jewel to add to the treasure chest for sure... Wonder what you'd use to polish a rare stone like that? I suppose a lot of patience and a real firm grip might do. a nice 5-7-5...... I like your style. |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
Understanding your passion for emeralds, and though the emerald green is so very rare, and eyes of the shade do make so fair..I really have to say the sapphire is the one for me..but then we do have our own feelings, don't we? But the write was excellent and gives more than the words seem..very well, my friend...gentle smile |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
are you Irish  |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
emeraude’s ascent given glory heaven bent emerald eyes know |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
Beautiful, Green Sven Pen!  |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
Beautiful Sven, very nice writing!! Nathan |
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MyEnchanted_Melody Senior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be. |
another piece of the magic you are casting with the emerald....... Quite lovely........ Thank u, sir.......of the emerald magic... ********************* It's only me.......only me |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
hi Sven... Very pretty this gem of a write dearFriend... Ya know, I kinda like emeralds too and saphires and garnets, oh, what heck they're all my favorites *~coco~* |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Sven - long time no see my friend, on my end that is... I hope that you didn't mind me adding a little of mine to your writing. It is so meaningful, I just had to... nights of emerald polished and tumbled so rare my jewel of passion 'morning light of greenish hue sparkling in your tender eyes passions you seek will find you...' BC |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
thank you all my friends for your wonderful words and for your excellent verses. . . I might be on this "green" kick for a while. . . I hope that no one minds. . . ---------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Sven, what an awesome senryu! Melissa~ |
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