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Professor Gloom
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of Depression

0 posted 2001-07-23 05:53 AM


Ornamental attraction
Pale when viewing is begun
Withering in the summer sun,
Ocean view to perfection
Never wet or stray from land
Planted with feet in the sand,
Allowing for inspection,
Growing into shades of red
Spreading from the toes to head,
When done from that direction,
Seeking the shallow shadows
Where brightness doesn’t follow
Finding darkness for protection.

Gloom


© Copyright 2001 Aszard Drazlom - All Rights Reserved
Cpat Hair
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1 posted 2001-07-23 08:34 AM


interesting... sunset, or sunlight on water... or still yet..another possibility or two come to mind...

I enjoyed..

Sunshine
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2 posted 2001-07-23 08:21 PM



I know what comes to mind, but something tells me it is not what you had in mind at the writing of this...

so BTTT for other eyes to read and discover....

Suetang
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since 2001-03-07
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3 posted 2001-07-23 08:58 PM


Professor Gloom
This was wonderfully written, I loved it.
Take care.....Sue

Suetang

Zinsser
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since 2001-02-27
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4 posted 2001-09-05 09:34 AM


Beautiful!!!
~Connie~

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