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Open Poetry #15

Embers for Viewing

Professor Gloom
Member Elite

since 2000-07-23

Posts 3082
of Depression

0 posted 2001-07-23 05:53 AM

Ornamental attraction
Pale when viewing is begun
Withering in the summer sun,
Ocean view to perfection
Never wet or stray from land
Planted with feet in the sand,
Allowing for inspection,
Growing into shades of red
Spreading from the toes to head,
When done from that direction,
Seeking the shallow shadows
Where brightness doesn’t follow
Finding darkness for protection.

Gloom

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

1 posted 2001-07-23 08:34 AM

interesting... sunset, or sunlight on water... or still yet..another possibility or two come to mind...

I enjoyed..

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

2 posted 2001-07-23 08:21 PM

I know what comes to mind, but something tells me it is not what you had in mind at the writing of this...

so BTTT for other eyes to read and discover....

Suetang
Member Ascendant

since 2001-03-07

Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia

3 posted 2001-07-23 08:58 PM

Professor Gloom
This was wonderfully written, I loved it.
Take care.....Sue

Suetang

Zinsser
Senior Member

since 2001-02-27

Posts 1641
Calif.

4 posted 2001-09-05 09:34 AM

Beautiful!!!
~Connie~

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