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Open Poetry #15

Black

Professor Gloom
Member Elite

since 2000-07-23

Posts 3082
of Depression

0 posted 2001-08-27 05:51 AM

Where do you look, into black,
Into dark,
Which way is it, front or back,
Why have I painted windows,
To make dark,
Deepen the depth of shadows,
When there was no chance to see,
In the dark,
That comfort where I don’t flee,
Where escape is a being,
Into dark,
To complete my souls fleeing.

Painted gilding mine design,
Black by dark thinking of mind.

Gloom

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

1 posted 2001-08-27 06:58 AM

Painted gilding mine design,
Black by dark thinking of mind.
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caliginous and cryptic ...
clever write in rhyme to define the dark side of ones mind.
well done poet Gloom.
jm

Krawdad
Member Elite

since 2001-01-03

Posts 2597

2 posted 2001-08-27 07:23 PM

And I hate all the d----- lights at night!!!
Bring on the shadowless dark!

Thanks, Gloom, I can relate.

poetsguild
Member

since 2001-08-12

Posts 85
Florida

3 posted 2001-08-27 09:17 PM

Obscure, yet riveting.

Another dark night of the...

Zinsser
Senior Member

since 2001-02-27

Posts 1641
Calif.

4 posted 2001-09-05 09:30 AM

I do like this one.....beautiful
~Connie~

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