Open Poetry #15 |
Blessed be.....thank you Walt... |
Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Blessed Be blessed be the birds that call as night begins decline sweetest voices chirp for all as slumbering limbs unwind blessed be the coffee’s brew that meets and melds with cream putting smiles into my day bringing me to my serene blessed be the early morn when sunlight begins it's stream words then come like shining ripples to fill up last night’s dreams... for I would write ‘neath luna’s light and burn my candles one by one but there are times the pleasure’s clear when I greet this new day’s sun so while you sleep away the day I shall sit and pen away so in the eve, when blankets cover you shall read this blessing over blessed be your poet’s pen that carves out time and space of men as women engrave their pause and ponder blessed be word’s trails left me to wander |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
A very lovely poem to all poets, we all pen till late at night and at times to the early morn of day. Thanks for the blessing and I pray you a good night sleep. Great work Sunshine; Rick |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
Oh well, WOW see... I like this poem I really do Sunshine I am for you How nice in reply you find a line and put it in verse full of rhyme Titia A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess... |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
Good Morning Sunshine! Greetings to you and your day. Your poem is fresh and inviting from slumber to wake! Thanks. Sincerely, Rwood |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
Karilea, This is just wonderful. I didn't want it to end. Michael Michael Auguste~ |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
A very lovely poem, Sunshine, speaks greatly of the person who penned it! *smiles* ~Tier |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
wonderfully blessed by this poem's caress great one, Karilea! |
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Zinsser Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641Calif. |
This was happy and fun.... I liked very much Thank You |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Sunshine, Lovely thoughts penned. Enjoyed this very much. PM "At the touch of love, everyone becomes a poet." -Plato |
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