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No Greater Prize
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No Greater Prize |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia 
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You are the early morning dew As the day begins to dawn You are the bud of a beautiful flower That is still yet to be born You are the sun's warming rays It's beautiful beams caress my skin You're much better than any prize Or a million dollar lottery win You are the one who visits my dreams And who makes my wishes come true You are the smile on my face As I so fondly think of you You are my guiding light at night That shows me the right way You are the words that come to mind Whenever I struggle for something to say So many things you are So special warm and true A gift I certainly cherish This love I have from you Suetang |
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deleeme Senior Member
since 1999-10-09
Posts 1766NEW ENGLAND, USA |
Sue, This is a lovely and touching love poem--the one to whom this is directed should be feeling like on "Cloud Nine" when he reads these endearing words. You have spoke your heart well! David Every Day's a Blessing |
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Trillium 
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Sue: Beautiful poem and I really enjoyed it. Betty Lou Hebert |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia |
Sue, this is so very beautiful! You said it better than I ever could! Great write here. I enjoyed it alot.  Sauni Sauni :) |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
Most tender. Again, I hope that emotions like this spread to the rest of humanity. -MVS "When you tell the Truth, you never have to remember what you just said." |
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shadow974 Senior Member
since 2001-06-21
Posts 636Michigan |
Tenderly loving, it is a treat to read this as is all of the love poems in the club. So much feeling pouring out of the heart. Do not fear going forward slowly, |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
Perfectly lovely. Michael Michael Auguste~ |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
I truly appreciate all your kind words and I'm glad you all enjoyed the read. Take care......Sue Suetang |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
This is so loving and dedicating. Truly leaving one refreshed in its spirit. Thank you for sharing! Sincerely, Rwood |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
So many things you are So special warm and true A gift I certainly cherish This love I have from you No greater prize indeed.....thanks for sharing this warm loving gem. Charisma |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* beautifully romantic. I LOVE IT. Your love shines in every word that flows from your pen. Love I leave with you my friend whether it be in your life or of yet the essense of your dreams. |
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2dalimit Member Elite
since 2000-02-08
Posts 2228Mississippi coast |
There just isn’t enough words to express one’s love, yet, you’ve done it so nicely and romantically. Melton |
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Zinsser Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641Calif. |
Very Well Done.... Thank You |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Thank you all so much for your heartfelt words. Take care......Sue Suetang |
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