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The Stranger Within
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The Stranger Within |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia 
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I delve into the depths of my mind and try so hard to recollect the last time that you and I were truly happy together Wasn't it the night when we were bathed in the moon's milky glow Counting the stars in the constellations way up high When we claimed the brightest star as our very own Such a memorable night that you seem to have forgotten I now see a stranger when looking into your eyes But my mind desperately tries to mould the image of this stranger's face back into the face that was once filled with so much passion and love for me As we once walked hand in hand under the moon's milky glow Suetang |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
Oh, This is so touching! I feel your words. Give this to him! Or at least take a magic marker and draw on his face while he sleeps! Get that glow back Girl! Keep writing! Sincerely, Rwood |
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2dalimit Member Elite
since 2000-02-08
Posts 2228Mississippi coast |
So sad. Sometimes love just fades away. Nicely expressed. Melton |
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Zinsser Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641Calif. |
This is very well done.... such emotion it evokes... Thank You |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
Nicely written, Sue...I like this...I like the images a lot... sp  it was love that first drew me, |
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