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Grab A Dream
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Grab A Dream |
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shadow974 Senior Member
since 2001-06-21
Posts 636Michigan 
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Grab a dream Let us cherish our dreams tonight In the morning we shall part Till a new night Until the romance is ripe Like fine wine We shall sip into the night Cherishing our dreams As we dance in the leaves Until the morning twilight No bed can keep us We sway amongst the clouds Knowing that The little angels shall wake up soon We look Up at our dreams In the star studded sky They have become closer In a few moments time Do not fear going forward slowly, Fear only standing still. [This message has been edited by shadow974 (edited 07-21-2001).] |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Shadow, I'll try a sip of that. |
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JLR Senior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785 |
Light and hopeful...enjoyed. |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
Romantically inclined as I am this is a little beauty. And a great idea for tonight! Thank you so much for sharing and your comments as well! Sincerely, Rwood |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
some lovely images lie here |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
Dan, I especially liked the last stanza: We look Up at are dreams In the star studded sky They have become closer In a few moments time (Did you mean to use the word "our" instead of "are", though?) This is a very creative description. -MVS "When you tell the Truth, you never have to remember what you just said." |
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shadow974 Senior Member
since 2001-06-21
Posts 636Michigan |
I'm a miss speller from way back, Thanks Mark, I'll fix it. Do not fear going forward slowly, |
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