Tasting the beach on our lips

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Open Poetry #15

Tasting the beach on our lips

walker
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since 2001-02-11

Posts 2240
Florida

0 posted 2001-07-18 07:49 PM

Summer's been hot
sizzling
I spread suntan
on your back
My hands glide
~connecting our thoughts~
The waves dance
they come and go
We kiss
tasting the beach on our lips
salty, rough
~surrendering to love~
Among palm trees
the warm sand
the sun's rays
the ocean breeze
In solitude
~we make love~

Sunshine

Administrator

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2001-07-18 08:00 PM

Ah yes....watch out for the summer burn....

enjoyed!

wandering glider
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since 2001-04-04

Posts 501
aloft

2 posted 2001-07-18 08:04 PM

Ahhhh, feals toasty.
(check the tide before you doze off!)

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

3 posted 2001-07-19 01:05 AM

in the middle of an island
in the middle of an ocean
you and I alone together
just the monkeys and the palm trees

~~~

yet it's no island at all
just a picture on my wall...

see what your poem did to me...took me back to Ricky Nelson, I think...

anyone know, was it???

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

4 posted 2001-07-19 04:15 AM

Wonderful descriptive writing...my kind of place...James

Charisma

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since 2000-09-30

Posts 5906
lost in blue pages

5 posted 2001-07-19 08:32 AM

oh I love the taste of beach on my lips.....
could taste it within your words.

Charisma

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

6 posted 2001-07-19 09:05 AM

Sounds like the menu of choice...

I enjoyed... nice feel and carry of thought...

**lost**
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since 2001-07-16

Posts 32
ma

7 posted 2001-07-20 10:54 PM

i like this one, it flows nicely and it seems as if you didnot meticulosly choose your words but let them flow from the heart to pen. good job

confused among strangers,
lost amongst myself.
**lost**

JLR
Senior Member

since 2001-02-04

Posts 1785

8 posted 2001-07-21 12:48 PM

Tasting the beach on our lips...great line. Enjoyed the imagery and use of senses. Good one, walker!

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

9 posted 2001-07-21 04:25 PM

Gotta get ready and head for the beach right now...its waiting for me...James

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