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Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla

0 posted 2001-07-21 08:07 AM


Hail

Insects see us the dinosaur
Just meat and bone and nothing more
They share with us the earth each day
It’s constant war our different way.

They play the game of hide and seek
Keep procreation at a peek
And live in places we can’t stay
For it’s the waiting game they play.

To me they have an edge on must
It seems they are not into lust
They share and have a job for each
It’s something that we do not teach.

I have a feeling deep inside
An emotion I cannot hide
This dinosaur has too much brass
And like the last will come to pass.

So hail to the victor his birth
For he will inherit the earth


© Copyright 2001 Seymour Tabin - All Rights Reserved
Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
1 posted 2001-07-21 09:20 AM



In some small way, we all inherit our fifteen minutes or so...

and then we're gone.

Well done Sy!

[This message has been edited by Sunshine (edited 07-21-2001).]

Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22
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2 posted 2001-07-21 09:37 AM


To me they have an edge on must
It seems they are not into lust
They share and have a job for each
It’s something that we do not teach.

I have a feeling deep inside
An emotion I cannot hide
This dinosaur has too much brass
And like the last will come to pass.

So hail to the victor his birth
For he will inherit the earth
=============================


you are so cool...once again I say--
I love the way your mind works...
This reminded me of that "old saying/joke"

"What will be the only things to survive the earths holocaust?
Cock Roaches and Mick Jaggers lips" *L*  

very cool poem of truth and wisdom Stinky
I wanna be the Queen Bee of your honey hive LOL  
*winkiewinkie*
me






only you could give love that satisfies the soul...
see the darkness of my heart and still won't let me go.

VAS
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450
Oregon
3 posted 2001-07-21 09:44 AM


good one, Sy, so you're saying the insects are the meek??? that's not what I think when I'm inundated by mosquito bites LOL


Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
4 posted 2001-07-21 09:47 AM


Sunshine,
No matter what you will still shine. *L*

JM,
Your beauty lies beyond this fare
No matter the when or where and
We will be Bee and Bee and
Play and sip raspberry tea.
Love ya Randy drone.

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07
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Tamarac Fla
5 posted 2001-07-21 09:49 AM


VAS,
What's a little love bite
In love and war. LOL

2dalimit
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since 2000-02-08
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Mississippi coast
6 posted 2001-07-21 10:03 AM


Excellent!!! No matter how hard we try, we will lose.

Melton

inot2B
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since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205
Arkansas
7 posted 2001-07-21 10:16 AM


I plan on cheating the insects from a fresh meal. I'm going to be cremated when medical school is finished practicing on me. I'll just be fertilizer!!
Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla
8 posted 2001-07-21 11:21 AM


2dalimit,
Glad you agree, thanks for the read.

Inot2B,
They might enjoy the fertilizer. LOL thanks for the comment.

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